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Okay thanks.
Now that makes sense.
Maybe buffalo type has more strength to force open those cuffs.

Nevermind about me, do go on.



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Okay thanks.
Now that makes sense.
Maybe buffalo type has more strength to force open those cuffs.

Nevermind about me, do go on.

He does, he's been on an exercise program. o.o Nah, he's just that strong :P

Chapter 4: Chaos

  Soldiers started marching down the halls, like robots. They all wore heavily armored suits, and guns as large as a behemoth. "Soldiers, aim!" the Raccoon yelled out. And they followed the orders. Fear started to show on Mike and Kyo's faces. But Rita looked as calm as a bird. "Um...Rita, now wouldn't be the time to stay calm...It would be the time to PANIC!", Kyo said. "Wait for it." she replied. She took out a small detonator switch.

  "Fire!", in that split second, Rita's thumb went down on the button. Kyo braced for an explosion, but was shocked when the only thing that came out was a soft high-pitched sound. All the soldiers dropped their weapons. They just froze there, and then fell down. "What the heck?" Mike said. "Everyone knows those nano-suits have a weakness to high-frequency noises. I just used it against them." she gave a smirk. "Um...Ok, but what about that guy?", the man just stood there, staring at his fallen slaves. He looked up, and walked away. "This isn't over. I had a tracking chip inserted into each of you. Expect to see me again, soon." They turned to face the doors, which opened. They walked out, without even a scratch. 

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Don't you just hate those people who say "comment plz or i wont write."? Well I do.

Chapter 5: Rain

  Back at the headquarters, the rain was coming down like mad. Kyo knew something wasn't right, but he just couldn't put his finger on it. A bolt of lightning came down, when Mike stepped into the room. "Hey.", Kyo said. "What's up? Listen, Scarlet's saying the weather ain't right. She says we should go investigate the Ghost Blue area. Rita said 'whatever', what do you say?", Kyo smiled "Whatever.". " 'Kay, be ready in like, 10 minutes.", and he walked out. "Ghost Blue, eh? I wonder what could--" suddenly a wave of nausea swept over him. He shut his eyes, and images flashed in his head. He saw a tall pirate-esque man, standing over a chasm. He was laughing, and gunning down just about everything. The words "Kar-an, Ka-Ran." kept coming in a whisper. "He shall bring the Great Flood, the mighty Karan." Kyo opened up his eyes. "Karan...That...Sounds so familiar. Wait..." he walked out his door, down to the small bookshelf in the main room. "C'mon...C'mon...Bingo!" he found a book titled  "The History of Karan, the Villian of the Sea." He opened it up.

  "Chapter 1: Karan was born in a rural area aptly named Oops Wharf; After the many accidents and deaths. His mother did not know she was pregnant, however. When he came, she sent him to an orphanage, where the Phantom School now stands. One thing little Karan was always interested in was piracy. By the time he was 15, he had already committed his first crime. And by age 20, he moved to Atlantic City, or, Ghost Blue." "Blah blah blah..." Kyo said, skipping through the pages. "Ah!" "Chapter 26: A strange old man had given Karan 3 items. An eye-patch, a gun, and a hat. He wore it, and was proud of it. However, soon, he changed. He started growing more power-hungry, more blood-thirsty. By age 30, Karan had committed his first murder. He also, started acquiring new powers. He could control water, and other creatures. Soon, people began panicking, and sent him into isolation, now named the Chasm of Death. A legend has been passed around that, if, by any chance Karan is lonely, or aggrivated, he can bring a mighty storm, sometimes leading to floods. People still continue to fight Karan to this day, hoping to acquire his power, but all have failed." He shut the book. "A mighty storm." he stared back at the window. Could it actually be...Karan? "Yo! Come on Kyo!", he turned around, grabbed a gun, and followed them, and he knew, it was the Chasm of Death.

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Nice introduction of Karan into the story ;)



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Nice introduction of Karan into the story ;)

Why thank you. Story Time.

  The man entered a mysterious cavern. A vague light gave off a mist. Rocks crunched under his feet as he walked. He felt something jump down, making a quiet swoosh noise. He stopped and turned. A man was behind him, his equipment with a strange light. The man ran and felt himself being chased, he knew of nothing else to do. Heading to the end of the cavern, he jumped, plunging down to an abyss.

Chapter 6: Villain of the Sea

  Ghost Blue was a strange place Kyo had only visited once or twice. The buildings were now collapsed, sunken in the sand, fish and other small things lay dead. It was like a giant aquarium, yet no water. This, was called Ghost Water, which lead to the name. A small hotel was totally destroyed, it's sign still intact, reading "Marina Inn". The rain made the sand soft, almost dissolving. A small cliff gaped down, a ladder leading the way. They climbed down, greeted by a sewer.

  "It's locked.", Rita said. "Really, Sherlock?", Mike replied. He walked up and tried to force open the door. It wouldn't budge. "We need a keycard." Mike said. "Really, Sherlock?" Rita said, quite rudely. "Um...If you guys would stop arguing...I found one.", Kyo walked up to the door and slid it down. "No dice. The code's totally smeared off.", "Where'd you get it?", Mike asked. "Right there.", Kyo pointed to a fancy jacket, laced with rhinestone and glitter. Mike stepped over to it. "Fancy man. I wonder if he...Died." 

  Out of the corner of his eye, Kyo spotted a green button. In bold letters, it said "Emergency Opening", out of instinct, Kyo pushed it, and sure enough, the door slid open. There was an overwhelming smell of waste, and decomposed flesh. They navigated their way through the maze of tunnels, reaching a dug-down hole. A shovel laid on the ground. "I guess we go down.", Rita suggested. They crawled down, one by one. The hole led down to a giant cavern. Stalactites seemed to be endless. They walked down, their footsteps echoing. The only sound was water dripping from the cave top. The wide space met into a narrow ravine.

  Soon their walk ended, to a large body of water. It was completely still. A few small rocks were raised up, Kyo stepped on one, acting as if they were stepping stones. He hopped over, and they followed suit. About five feet of cave was left, until it led to a large fall. Footprints were embedded into the soil,  as if somebody already had ran to this spot. Suddenly, the cave started rumbling. The water, no longer calm, went wild. The large stepping stones cracked, falling down with a large splash. A figure jumped down from the shadows, what he had on him sufficing the only light. He weld a pistol in one hand. His hat, seemed to be on fire, and his eye-patch, shining. Kyo froze with fear. " A strange old man had given Karan 3 items. An eye-patch, a gun, and a hat.", he instantly knew who it was. The man gave an eerie laugh. "So, more imbeciles have come to fight me? You surely want to die. For, do you know who I am?", "N-No.", Mike stuttered out. "I! AM KARAN! VILLAIN OF THE SEA!"

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So did they fight with Karan or did Karan help them to get those tracking devices off?
Or did Karan went to fight with them like comrades and leave the decomposed area behind?



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So did they fight with Karan or did Karan help them to get those tracking devices off?
Or did Karan went to fight with them like comrades and leave the decomposed area behind?

Ha, nothing's happened yet. You got to wait 'til the next chapter :P

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Ah quick :x
I need more.
Your story's wriggling around in my brains now.



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Ah quick :x
I need more.
Your story's wriggling around in my brains now.

Good to know someone likes my story :P And for you I will ;D

Chapter 7: Clash of the Waves

  Karan didn't hesitate making the first move. He raised his gun and fired. They jumped out of the way, but to Kyo's surprise, instead of bullets, they were pearls. "They must be strong pearls, or a strong gun." he thought. Rita threw a shuriken at Karan, but it didn't even phase him. Mike pulled out his sword and tried hitting him, but that didn't work. Karan kept firing his pearls, and they kept dodging. "You fools can't keep doing this forever." Karan replied calmly. Kyo pulled his Robo Gun out. These were the standard guns for G.Y.R.O, being the most powerful. He shot off a bullet, a pulse of light going through his gun, but again, no effect.

  After a while of dodging and attacking, Kyo had something spring in his head. He picked up the pearls, and loaded them into his gun. "I hope this works." he said. Once Karan had to reload, he took his chance. He shot him in the arm, and, suprisingly, it pierced Karan's skin. "Ahhh!" he cried out. His gun fell from his hand. He gripped his arm, in agony. Kyo ran towards his gun, picking it up. Karan reached for it, his hand stained crimson. Kyo fired both guns at the same time, into his chest. He fell to his knees. The blood dripping down his shirt. "Y-You...", Kyo looked at him in triumph.

  However, to his amazement, Karan stood up. He took off his hat and eye-patch. "You...How dare you! Karan's eyes turned as black as death itself. The cave walls started rumbling loud, loose rocks actually falling. The water was so wild, he could hear it. "You...Defeated me. And now, you shall pay!"Suddenly, he pulled another gun out, this one with light so bright, it looked as if it was on fire. It was significantly larger, also. A weird blue aura surrounded him. He pointed the gun directly at Kyo. The aura left Karan, latching onto Kyo. He was immobile. "Have you ever felt death before? No? Well...Now you will!"

  The man awoke from his jump. Surprisingly, he wasn't hurt that much. He could feel something weird in the atmosphere. He kept on running, to whatever freedom met his way in his seemingly endless journey. Even if it was death, it was better than what he was living with now.

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So Kyo became the next successor to this "decomposed" area?
And Karan ran away?

So who's using the eyepatch and hat now?
From the fiction itself, Kyo picked the pearl gun, but .. what about the rest of the uniques?



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