I love Aelita's story so check out ... Untitled Story...etc XD too lazy to write all of it
A Soul Lost
Chapter 1- The Mystery
*Sighz* I have to go school again =_=. I wish I could have more than two friends, Shannon and ME >:(. I feel like we're the weirdest and most different girls of this school. That's 'cause we are not humans but we keep that a secret
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"WEEEEEE," Shan said because last period just ended and YOU KNOW get home. Well things went different, my mom was home early from detective work and she had a intense look in her crystal sapphire eyes. " I need help." I bet she saw the surprized looks on all of my sister's faces, mine too... She never needed support with her cases! Her powers were fading or the evadence was unbearably hard to understand." I know I never ask but, I need your guys talents to find out about these numerous murders. I've detected the killer is only killing young women such as teens... But there is no trace of how the girls were murdered." I thought about it and thought it was impossible for my mom's abilities not to give a lot of info about it. " Maybe you didnt check EVERYWHERE on the body," my older sis Lita whose a senio atm. Everyone giggled except mom ~ she thought about it... Did she die of a disease ignoring Lita's comment. But she had forgotten that her powers said it was murder or suicide~. It was a breathless moment except that Hito which is a freshman like me that just let out a big burp. XD
Sorry if there was spelling errors and Im pretty crappy in english
TEH PEOPLE -
Mother- idk yet but I will figure out
Mizzy ish the kitty who talks a lot XD
Mizzy's friend - Supershannon
Sister that is a senior- Aelita
Sister that's sophomore- Choco
THESE ARE NOT THE REAL PPL'S AGES THAT I KNOW OF
their just guildies and friends and and and I LOVE POTATOES
wait off the subject XDDD um... if you reconize this story It wasnt copied
just seems like it 0.0 and beginning is always suckish part so dont be mean
also I dont like mystery stories but it has romance in it a lot well gonna be XD
Ill try to be funny o_o
RANDOM PIC OF ME 8D IM NOT VAIN XDDD
I hope this story ends up in the place I want it to be e.e
Life is just something that passes your mind quiickly without a sight or feeling, then you're...
Hito's the brother or friend? A lil' confusing here.
in progess (:
Well she is another sis, there's lots of sisters 0.0 I guess I forgot to post her charactor xD woops
Shannon should be the friend also theres another friend but Im gonna write it in chapter 2
Haha, okay no problem :D
who are you on trickster o_O
frostyfox: who are you on trickster o_O
Check out my biography (:
:D NICE JOB MIZZY!!! i like it, but i dont like being a senior, Id rather be small and hyper XD
Ty for commenting my story and heres a few tips for yours:Put more spaces so it can be more understandable, I have 20:20 vision and it was straining my eyes and hard to read that when its all squished ><
^^ just a tip, good luck Mizzy
Siggy: credit to blushi~^^,color edited by yours truly
Thx for the info, and xHazel hiya XD
Chapter 2-Love doesn't cross my mind
"Well I should be heading off now," mom said as she stormed off. Choco went back to her room as she called her bf. " Whose her bf Lita?" Lita almost died of laughter... My older sisters never tell me anything *pissed off*. They treat me like piece of 'cause my powers haven't shown up yet but my mom said I'm just a late bloomer, I don't believe that's true though. My mom has magnificent powers she could touch one's hand or an object and see its past, present, and future. Lita's powers is telekinesis and can make objects out of dark power, I suppose dark because how EBIL SHE IS. Choco's powers are to read people's minds but she never does on purpose she just slips in their head, also OHH MY GAWWSSHH SHE CAN FLY!! Hito's part leoppord and she can transform to a full blooded one. But we all have DNA mixtures in our bodies. I am part kitty, Lita is part bunny, Choco is part bunny too. And you know Hito's other part of her. Shan is also part kitty but she has her powers already, they're the ability of strength and has very good stealth.
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I picked up my cell and called Exo, a very close friend but haven't seen him much this year so I don't count him as a friend. " Hello, Exo's residence, Exo speaking."
"Hey, can I come over and use one of your keys?"
" Eh, sure anthing for you. What time?"
" 10:30 "
Then he paused. " WHERE DID YOU GO?!!? " I yelled almost feeling stu
not finished
Um...It sounds pretty good, but may I suggest to not use some internet abbreviations in your story? It wouldn't be that hard to type boyfriend but you know, whatever... ._.
There are some things in life we can't do...And that's why we have the internet.
Thx for the info XDD I mean I didnt write it out cuz I was soo tired atm