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Chapter 3: Period one class; boringness much?
Miu sat staring out the window, if there WERE windows...
She sat up and tried to listen to the teacher when a girl named Hitomi walked in.
"IM SORRY IM LATE MRS SEPHIRA I..." She was cut off by the teacher's sympathetic voice,
"Its all right Hito. Just sit down in an empty seat..umm theres one next to Miu." Magician Sephira instructed in a calm voice.
Miu couldnt help but notice that Hito had rigged a PPD to actually send messages to people, like a cell phone has texting. "Wow, Hito thats kewl." Miu whispered to Hitomi.
"Thanks, um do I know you? " She responded, Her Golden brown hair glistening in the light of the lanterns.
Miu shook her head.
"Ok now today we're going to learn Mana Arrow! Your first offensive attack!" Sephira's smile glistened as her small little body jumped up and down.
Miu smirked deviously, and Hito pretended to laugh ""ebily""
Then Principal Esther walked in to observe the students. She seemed to examine Miu more than the others; Miu was the only one who would most likely become a Dark Attribute Witch when she graduated. Esther wrote down her name in her little notepad then walked out of the room.
"She seemed to be suspicious about you Miu" Hito whispered.
"Well when I learn dark magic, she wouldnt DARE to think like that."
The two girls giggled then began listening to Magician Sephira once more.
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"Ok all you power types! Lets learn Powerrr!!!! Not like all those other prissies out there!" Master Louis Did a twirl, showing off her Black Belt in the martial arts.
Aelita listened attentively, yet she couldnt help glancing at a cute buffalo sitting two desks away from her.
"Ok! Today principal esther thought we should learn offensive skills~!" Louis cheered. "Lets learn shockwave!!!"
Aelita cheered, being a bunny, it was hard to not being excited to all the incredible skills she could learn.
"Ok! everyone pick a partner to train with!" The instructor smiled and everyone began shuffling to find a partner.
Aelita immediately noticed an awesome looking Orange bunny who seemed to act like she was one of the Tent Dolls to avoid having to "learn" She sat next to her and the orange bunny began laughing.
"lol do i know you?" She asked, giggling.
"Nope, but hey do you wanna be partners?!" Aelita Smiled, "Im Aelita, but most people call me Lita."
"Im Choco~" And the two girls started talking, ignoring the teacher.
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I Might add more to that chapter as an edit, XD I dont think i included much, but i didnt want to keep you waiting
Wow your chapters are short and sweet. Love it ^-^ Read the first chapter of my story when i get done!
Chapter 4: The Scream
A wild, blood curdling shreak came from the top floor of the school.
"Uhm just ignore that children, probably a spider or another monster hiding up there." Sephira sounded as suspicious as ever.
Miu raised her hand.
"Yes Miu?" The teacher asked.
"What is up on the top floor?" Miu asked, still listening attentively for any other strange happenings.
"Uhmm...Don...Don Guivanni^^ His office is up there." She answered, stammering to cover facts.
"What happens up there?" Miu questioned further.
"Oh hon its a secret^^ When you advance to second job and get a passing grade in Mermaid Palace Geography, you'll find out."
Miu slouched in her seat and glanced at Hito, who shrugged.
Just then another scream came from the top floor and seemed to be coming closer to the classroom. The shreaks seemed to pass them, and end at a ground or blockade of some sort.
Just then the bell rang. Miu spent no time dilly dallying, for in a matter of seconds, she might never figure out what that noise came from. So she quickly grabbed her notebook, spellbook, and sack, and sprinted full speed out the door, Hito trying to follow her.
Aelita noticed Miu run by and she ran after her, Choco by her side.
Then outside, laying on the grass, was a second job cat, and a dragon hovering down.
"DONT TOUCH HER!" Aelita screamed and used a power up scoll. She flew into the air, and on her way up, she swiftly used her new skill on the third job dragon, "SHOCKWAVE!" and she hurled a huge punch at the dragon.
But the dragon barely flinched, "Heh heh you kids better be away from here before someone gets hurt." he said in a deep voice.
"Mana arrow~!" Miu whispered and a shining blue arrow appeared, it flew at the dragon like a glass dagger, but it hit some sort of ray of blue light.
"Heh heh, you noobs dont even know power." The Dragon spoke, "That was my mana shield, a defensive move, but I think offense is better heh heh." He lifted his dark staff and yelled out, "DARK LANCE!" Miu froze, unable to run, unable to scream, as the lance made of pure dark energy pierced through her.
"MIU!" Draco called as he ran outside of the school.
Miu remained still on the ground, her black dress turning red from blood.
Just then, Rizuki bolted through the gates to the school, his eyes filled with rage, in one hand he held a bloody rune of fate, in the other, his pearl pistol. He sprinted around the dragon and shot him strait in the heart.
"Shannon!" Riz ran to the pink haired cat's side. He stroked her hair, and felt for her heart beat. "Someone...ANYONE please heal her!"Draco immediately cured the cat, and she sat up.
"Uh...Mah...Ah...I..." Her voice trailed off, she sounded exhausted.
"DRACO!" Aelita slapped Draco.
"WUT?!?" Draco yelled back and tried to slap Aelita back, but she was too fast.
"HEAL MIU YOU IDIOT!" Aelita slapped him again.
"OK OK JUST QUIT SMACKING ME! " He complained, then healed Miu.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * "Miu....Miuanu..." A voice whisper yelled.
"Who....who are you." Miu answered back.
"I...am....your...mothe..."* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * ** * * * * * * * * * *
Miu's dream ended with Draco slapping her.
"WAAAAKEEEE UUUPPPPPPP!" He said, slapping her face back and forward.
"I AM AWAKE YOU DIM WIT!!!!! " Miu Stood up and slapped him as hard as she could across the face.
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Esther stood from a balcony on the 11th floor. Examining the students below.
She reached for her Walky talky, "These ones are a powerful bunch. We'll have to rid of them..."
"Yes mam. but how are we sopposed to complete that task."
"Oh..We need them to get second job...then automatically pass them in geography. Then Don can take care of them. He wont even know he's doing anything wrong either. Heh heh." Esther then shut off her walky talky, and went back into the school, just as the final bell rang.
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^^ tysm! imma edit that chapter i just wrote XD just got home from schoolioo
Edit: Note to readers, I ended chapter 4 now^^ Enjoy~ I Might not write more..if not many people are reading my story >< but I think ill write a few more chapters, keep commenting ^^ it really helps me write
Chapter 5: The Phantom School's new look.
Miu sat on her bed the next morning, dressed all in black.
She had a picture frame in her hand, a picture of her mother.
"....mom..." Miu said, Her dark black eyes turning to a glassy turquoise blue.
Then Miu stood up, and opened the gray curtains, only to let in a small ray of light so she could read an inscription on the back of the photo frame.
To my amazing daughter, Miu, never forget me, I will always be with you.
Then below it, something was written in another language.
"Whats this?..."Miu tried to read it, but the language made no sense to her.
Miu set the Picture down on her bed, Put on her black FLATS, and walked out the door.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Miu slowly strolled to school, by herself. When she came apon the gate to the school, something seemed strange.
The gate was closed.
Miu walked up to the gate and examined the heavy iron pad lock it had. "No worries.." She thought then made stairs out of mana rings, and swiftly hopped over.
The school looked different.
It was dark, and gray, seeming that a dark aura had taken over the school.
As a precaution, Miu took out her sack, and pulled out a third job light witch scroll.
She used it and flew into the air, A Shield of White lights surrounding her, known as "Shield of heaven" Then with one feeling of reluctance, Miu felt her head throb. Something was in that school...and it wasnt treating her too well, even thought she wasnt even inside yet.
Miu ate an herb to restore her concentration and slowly walked into the school.
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The air was musty, the stone floors were replaced with beaten up ply wood floorboards.
Miu slowly made her way down the hall, and seemed to hear someone or a group of people crying.
She tiptoed by each classroom and slowly made her way where she was not yet allowed to go, the 2nd floor, for 2nd job students ONLY.
Miuanu cautiously followed the sound of the cries, which led her to the job advancement room.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~The room seemed empty, but she could hear the cries from in the room.
"MIU!" A voice whisper screamed.
"Who...where are you?"Miu whispered, looking around the room.
"We're invisable, to hide from the spirits..." Another voice, sounding like a 3rd job fox said to Miu. "Come. stand on the podium and Ill make you invisable too. Then you will see us."Miu did what the fox said, and soon she saw everyone, Aelita, Choco, Hito, Shannon, Rizuki, Draco, and a few others from the classes. She also saw a fox. She was wearing blue and white, and had a smile full of wisdom on her face, though obviously she wasnt old, but she was around 17, which was about six years older than Miu and seven years older than Aelita.
"Thank you, um I didnt catch your name fox^^." Miu said, her voice hushed so no one outside of the room could hear her.
"Suzuki, But you can call me Suz^^" The fox smiled.
"Whats going on here?" Miu asked the small group of people.
"I dont know...we came to school and some sort of ghost turned this school...dark...and whatever." Rizuki took out and fidgeted with his Pistol, Shannon right next to him.
"Someone or something is either trying to scare everyone away, get rid of someone, or ...." The fox's voice trailed off. She heard a noise coming from outside.
"Whos tha.." Aelita started
"SHHH" Draco covered her mouth.
Then everything was still. Absolutely still.