Virushen's fan fiction: The Darkness Within

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Virushen:

thanks for the suggestion :)

but I am kind of inactive these days, and do not plan to write currently.

Maybe later. Thanks again.

I just noticed that we both stoped typeing up our fan fics about the exact same time.  O.o

 

But ill type up a six maybe more chapters soon for my story.... if anyone is interested or cares. >.>

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LucianG:

Virushen:

thanks for the suggestion :)

but I am kind of inactive these days, and do not plan to write currently.

Maybe later. Thanks again.

 

I just noticed that we both stoped typeing up our fan fics about the exact same time.  O.o

 

But ill type up a six maybe more chapters soon for my story.... if anyone is interested or cares. >.>

 

I don't really care about this fan-fic anymore... lol

probably because of my lost of interest in trickster and daily life stuff (I am having examinations currently). 

Oh and I came to realise that the story terribly (but unintentionally) resemble my favourite book series, Harry Potter... I didn't mean it to be like that, but yeah, the ideas pop out just like that

Necromane - Voldemort

Long - Harry

Duffi - Ron

Flora - Hermione

Ryo - Sirius

Queen Nefertiti - probably a female counterpart of Dumbledore?

XD

so... rest in peace Long and friends , until I finally come back to trickster (if I decide to)

Thank you Derzhy for the siggy~

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do you mean moganical?

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eh.. last reply, was september... drop

this post might be a little.. late... (I hardly go to the forums, and only found this today) but just wanted to say I really liked this fanfic (^_^) It has a nice flow to it, that makes it enjoyable~ I actually read through all 30 pages and rated in page 27 as well xD (see, it's good!)

I know you don't update anymore, but if you ever do I will read it for sure~

(and kind of off-topic, but how is your user-name pronounced? In my head I say, 'Vi - Ru - She - N' but I just realised it could be pronounced 'Virus - Hen --> Vai - ra - su - He - n' as well (._.) sorry, just wanted to get the correct name...) 

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*uses redemption on thread* WHY WON'T YOU LIVE IT WAS TOO YOUNG *starts to cry* WHY WHY WHHHHYYYYYYYY WHY GM's WHY (note: I'm not complaining to the GM's most people do this if a realy young person dies or something very bad happens.)WHY MUST THE GOOD DIE YOUNG!

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*Virushen IS BACK..... for 1 minute...*

@Kiouku

thank you very much :)

I am so glad that there are still people reading this old thread. glad you like it and read all of it too.

about my username, well there's no fixed pronounciation. but I myself prefer it to be Viru-shen. But it has got a deeper meaning, which I refuse to say, and don't ask me :P

@trancerocks

lols

thanks anyway.

and this thread is not quite dead forever yet.

It's just undergoing a cold sleep :P

whatever you do, GMs, moderators, please do not delete it.... (actually you can, because the fan-fic is saved in my computer too, and I could make a brand new thread if this thing rots too much)

there's is very little chance that I will come back to trickster after my exams are finally over for good. So I am quitting for now. I am also quitting because I don't find trickster interesting anymore...

but if I do come back, I will have to play quite a long time first, before I can adapt myself back into the game, and also implement the new changes in trickster to this fan-fic.

thanks for all of your support :)

 

Thank you Derzhy for the siggy~

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YEY YEY YEY!!!

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omg, please continue ):
I read all of your chapters in like 6 hours.

Maybe 7. Please continue ):
It's really good D:



in progess (:

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iPaws:

omg, please continue ):
I read all of your chapters in like 6 hours.

Maybe 7. Please continue ):
It's really good D:

 

really o_O???

thank you very much for reading =)

and I am sorry if this story took so much of your time.

To thank everyone, I will just write a new chapter then :)

although this one may not sound so good, as it has been very long ever since I played trickster.

I will edit this page for the next chapter anyway

Thank you Derzhy for the siggy~

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Well, about time to end this long story... but it's not really an ending, and there's no thrilling climax... I decided to end it partly due to my absence. But I will continue it with the sequel, once I am back in trickster.

Chapter 48 – Good bye

 

“The scythe was really strong I have to say.” Eclipse broke the silence. No more tears were left on Long’s and Flora’s tear glands.

 

“Luckily, the universe was not affected in any way. A grim reaper is a grade negative 3 organism. It won’t harm if it see you in the past. I won’t go into detail why is it a negative number organism.”

 

“STOP IT YOU IDIOT! LET’S RETURN TO THE PAST AGAIN! BEFORE RYO WAS ATTACKED!” Long shouted back.

 

Eclipse stepped back. “Didn’t you read rule number 43? It says, you cannot go to the past of a past. Once you go to a past, you can only go to a nearer past to the future. But I won’t go into detail why....”

 

“WHO FREAKIN’ CARE ABOUT THAT.... JUST GO!!”

 

“I can’t. I am sorry. The queen did not instruct for a second time travel. It’s not for free anymore, especially if you are breaking the rule.”

 

Long kneeled and shouted Ryo’s name out loud again. He just could not bear the grief and the guilt. His best senior was now gone. And to think that he sacrificed himself again, by preventing Long use the flower of revival. The depression that was hitting him was really bizarre. He could not tell whether it was stress or was it the anger of the whispers. But he did not care a bit. He mourned and mourned.

 

And it suddenly just came to him. He rose and picked up his ruby staff. Flora, who was still weeping, noticed this.

 

“*Sob*... what are you doing, Long?”

 

“I am not going to let Ryo’s sacrifice to waste! All I do were sacrifices, and I really regret it! Now the only way.... the only way...” he paused, “... is to heed Necromance’s advice...Once I become a dark lord, I... I am going to repel these nasty whispers once and for all... and ..... and.... I WILL MAKE SURE I KILL THAT IDIOT....” Long shouted. The whispers had seemed to finally take full control over him.

 

Dark mist appeared all over Long. His eyes were bloodshot red again. But this time, it seemed to be the worst. Flora stared in fear, unable to stand and restrain her friend.

 

“What a cunning little curse.... it makes you all wild and creepy. It gives great determination to the sufferer to get rid of the whispers. When he finally does become the darkness... it will destroy him, before he could do so...” Eclipse muttered.

 

Long’s berserk was mixed with his grief over his dead friend and the temptations of the ghostly whisper. He screamed again, and ran towards the woods. And shortly later, he disappeared, just like the dark mist surrounding the place.

 

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And that concludes our story... for now...

 

It begins with the end. The end ends with the beginning...

 

What will happen to Long? Is Duffi safe? Will Flora be able to survive by herself? Will the evil Necromance finally be defeated?

 

Find out in the second story, the sequel to darkness within...

 

Thank you Derzhy for the siggy~

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