Fan-fic By Yaripon

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Dekapon Posted: 12-02-2008 5:58 PM

OK, if any of you have read the previous thread by me, The first chapter is on there. I'll just repost it^^^

 

  Chapter 1: Caballa Island?

 "Ugh. Another boring day of P.E. with Mr. Beadles" Daniel said changing into his P.E. uniform. "I wonder if anything could get any more boring?"

When Daniel went outside, he was greeted by Lisa, a girl she had a secret crush on.

"Daniel, do you know what Caballa Island is?" Lisa asked.

"No, is is some new restaurant?"

"Hardly, It's a place where people can vie for a fortune!"

"Cool!"

"Um... do you wan-"

"To go? Sure thing!"

Later that night, Daniel started to pack up his things and make snacks for the trip and went to sleep.

In the morning, Daniel woke up to the sound of a ringing phone. He picked up the phone and suddenly righed out the door. He got his bike and started rushing to the dock.

When he arrived, he saw that Lisa had just arrived, wearing some odd costume.

" Hey Lisa" Daniel said, getting off his bike "What's with the duds?"

"What's with the scarf?" Lisa asked in rebuttal.

"I thought it was going to be cold, and besides, the scarf is sexy!"

"No it isn't. Anyway, did you pick up your ears and tail? You need yo wear them if you wanna get onto the boat"

"OK, I'll get some."

Daniel and Lisa walked to the kiosk that was giving the ears and the tails out.

"Hey buddy, what class do you wanna be?" Said the manager.

"I'll take.......... Lisa, what did you choose?" Said Daniel, who seemed to be flustered.

"I got a Fox, the male variant is the Lion." Said Lisa, who actually knew what the variation was between.

After Daniel put his costume on, the manager said "You gotta have a name"

END CHAPTER 1 
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Chapter 2: Names

"Hmmmm.... a name?" Inquired Daniel.

"Yeah, you gotta have a nickname brfore entering, buddy" Replied the kiosk manager.

"Ok" Daniel said, "I'll choose Yaripon, or Yari for short"

"Ok, then I got it. Have a wonderful time at Caballa Island"

Walking back to Lisa, Yari asked Lisa "What did you choose for your name, Lis?"

" I choose Teraglier, or Tera for short" replied Lisa, beginning to board the ship. 

Along the way, there was a female sheep who saw Yari. Yari looked at the unfililar figure, and just looked at her. The girl winked at him, and Yari just smiled. 

Moving along the ship, Yaripon encountered his friends Donald and Allen, two twin racoons.

"Hey, It's Al and Don!" Yari said in a relaxed manner

"Hey" the twins said in unicin.

"So, what should I call you guys now?"

"Just call me TrickstererDon" Said Donald

"Call me biggernernub" Replied Alan

"Don and Nub, easy to remember" Replied Daniel "I'll go-

Tera whisked Yari away from Don and Nub, dragging Yari to his new room for the trip.

Well, we're approaching Caballa Island in a couple days!

 

END CHAPTER 2 

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Chapter 3: Friends

"Alright!" Yaripon said, rushing out, "We're finally here!"

As Yaripon and his friends explored Caballa Island, they got stronger, met new friends, and fought some major baddies!

The girl who winked at Yaripon when he was boarding the boat became his friend, and had a major crush on him.She shows it, but Yaripon does not care. They also made other friends, Such as a buffalo who will stop at nothing to get treonger, a cat who Don and Nub fight over for her love, and a Lion who is completely aloof from the team, yet he is the strongest member of the team.

One year later...

Yaripon is now a cyber hunter, Tera a thief master. Don and Nub became a Duke and Gambler respectively. The Buffalo Teydon became a powerful gladiator, while Euphremia the sheep became a very helpful Soul master, and for that Lion Caellach? nobody knows. The cat Neko changed to a lovely Diva.

 (The party was going to defeat Count blood)

The night before the fight, Yari decided to buy some potion for the group, but he wandered to see the Count Blood's Magnificent castle. Yaripon then went into a pitch black room. Being more curious than scared, Yaripn ventured into the room. A second later, the door shut and a Dark Lord appeared him and said "What have we here?

END CHAPTER 3

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I have a question with 3 possible answers. Howcome it was suddenly school time then they went to cabella island?

1: This whole thing has become like pokemon and the students were exempted from school to go to cabella island. XD

2: The teachers and staff of the school wanted the fortune of cabella island so much that they went to cabella island themselves so that the school closed down and the students went to cabella island too. XD

3: The students had a 1 year holiday. LOL

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Ohz noez. Iz Count Blood! *Hides behind nearest piece of funiture*

Great fanfic~ I'm looking forward to seeing who gets to pwnt Blood like a pinata.

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Chapter 4: Betrayal?

"GWAAAAAAACK!" Yaripon was subdued by the blow from the Dark Lord's staff, meanwhile, another figure began to creep in.

"Ah, Aruel, have you found our puppet?" Asked the voice.

"Yes, my lord" answered Aruel, picking Yaripon up.

"Excellent. Let the mind control begin!"

5 hours later....

"Ow....." Yaripon said, getting up. He then looked at his watch and instantly ran back to the campsite, hoping that no one has found out of his disappearancee.

"There you are." Caellach said in a quiet and calm manner "Where were you?"

"Me?" Yaripon said innocently "I I was out....."

"You're hiding something, I can sense it"

Yaripon's eyes instantly turned blood red and began attacking Caellach ruthlessly, waking everybody

As everyone awoke, Yari's eyes began to return to it's normal colors.

  "Mornin'" said Don and Al

"mmm" Teydon muttered out half-asleep

"Training?" asked Tera

"I guess." returned Yaripon.

The team then set out for Count Blood's castle, however, Caelleh grabbed Yaripon by the sirt and said "I'm watching you, little runt"

He then threw Yaripon to the ground, leaving him there.

As the party reached the Count's palace, Yaripon rushed into the castle doors and saw the Count sitting on his throne.

"Ah, there you are Daniel" count Blood said, yawning "Will you please dispise of out extra guests?"

"Hey, Yari- " Neko just froze in position

Yari was clenching his fists and shouting out in agony "My...my.......head........it.. it's splitting!"

"Now, now. There's no need for that type of nonsense. Kill them all."  Count Blood said, drinking some off liquid

 "Yes master" Yaripon said emptily. Yari then flung out his blade an began to assault Al and Don, both deflecting his blows.

"Daniel, stop!" They said guarding themselves

Daniel said nothing. Al and Don were going to stop Daniel, but the Count appeared behind Daniel with a blade, on the verge of stabbing him.

"If you ever want to see your friend again, leave."

"You f*cking fiend! I'll kill you!" Shouted out Teydon

"OK, we'll leave, Euphremia said, crying "Just don't kill him!"

"very well, I won't..... yet"   The Count said with a smirk on his face

The team then left the gate, only to see three shadowy figures surrounding Daniel. The doors shut, and there were gun shots, slashed, and a cry in pain on the other side of the team. 

"I hope that wasn't Daniel" Tera said with some sadness.

"Who cares?" replied Caelleach

"What?" Tera said, clenching her fists and grinding her teeth "Little Da-"

The doors suddenly opened, and there was Yaripon, his clothes ripped, blood dripping, and a sword impaled into his body. 

"Daniel? DAAAANNNNIEEEELLLL!" Euphremia shouted out 

Yari blacked out as soon as Euphremia began to approach him

END CHAPTER 4

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Chapter 5: Yari's nightmare

This vid is NOT made by me, and kudos to the creater, just what I needed for my story

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FEuShKCg9KI&feature=channel

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Everybody! It Sunday! (for me^^^)

Ok, I got a theme song (Yes, I like . I love you!//Roots JUST LIVE WITH IT!)

 Notes: I do not own . I love you!//Roots or any of it's other affiliates, nor I have a contract with Bee Train, just to let you peoples know Don't sue me!

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ilH_GMBMiJg&fmt=18

Ok, the characters in this are 

The person seen running, is Yaripon, without his coat on, and the person in the backround is unknown at this time

The girl walking after me is Euphremia, and the person in the backround is Callech

The cat-girl running along is Neko (you knew that) The person behind is Al

The cloaked person is Don (OMG spoilers!)

Teh person at:55 is Yaripon, under Count Blood's curse

at 1:09, Tera there flippin the knife!

 

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For some odd reason, this thread isn't displaying correctly on my computer . . . Anyways . . . Next chapter, pl0x? D: The suspence is killing me!

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