I've written before, i just never had it based on something copyrighted. : ) so please be gentle.
and now ill start writing.
Characters:
Kiki: a shy 14 year old sheep with pink hair who’s kind and feeling a bit of a spark towards Noah.
Noah: a 14 year old dragon with purple hair who’s a bit depressing on the outside, but that shell’s easily broken.
Ian: an energetic lion with blonde hair that’s happiness sometimes gets on everyone’s nerves.
Sarah: a fox with brown hair who usually is serious, but on occasion, she will have a little fun.
Kristi: a hard-hitting bunny with blue hair who’s easily amused with activities like drilling.
Justin: An easily aggravated buffalo with brown hair that likes annoying Kristi who is much weaker than him.
Max: a brown haired raccoon that always stays calm even under an immense amount of pressure.
Casey: An award winning cat model with blonde hair that believes in love at first sight. (at least when looking at max.)
And so we begin.
note: all 14!
(magic)The train rumbled along as Kiki and Noah took their seats in the red booth at the back of the car. it was not that loud on the train, but loud enough so people couldn't hear their conversation. "Kiki, I need to talk to you about something.""What is it Noah?" she said putting down her book."Remember when we were six? when we used to have those little pretend adventures that you liked?"Yeah, why?""A long time ago you wanted for those adventures to be real, and I think I found a way."Noah held up the Caballa island poster."Come and compete in the Caballa island contest, and win a fortune from Don callaver's stash. compete against others and grow stronger fighting monsters as you race the others to the finish. It's a great adventure, so don't miss out!"Kiki looked at the paper, and then Noah, and then the paper again. "Noah! Thank yo-""Attention passengers. the train track in front of us is broken, and there's no time to pull the break. please brace yourself for the impact."the train shook and toppled over again and again. Kiki could barely see what was happening, but she caught a glimpse of Noah, already out cold, and bleeding in several places. But before she could help him, everything went dark. (scene change! wee!)(Power)"hai! ay! cha!"Kristi screamed that as she punched the punching bag in front of her three times so hard, it ripped in half. Justin, on the other hand kicked it once and his foot went right through."beat that loser!"Justin was an immature person that justed loved to get on Kristi's nerves. If Kristi heard one more insult today..."That's right, you can't! 'cause you're a GIRL!That REALLY got Kristi flared up, and every other girl in the gym. Kristi held back her urge to kill justin, but no one else had the willpower."AAH! HELP! AIIIIEEEEE!"Kristi chuckled as she heard that. She picked up her bags and began to leave when she spotted a poster for something called Caballa island. It said that there were plenty of things to train on. something to make her better than justin. but little did she know, Justin was going to Caballa island as well, but she'd have to find out later.(to be cointinued)I know, it probably sucks. i just felt like writing. :(
(magic)The train rumbled along as Kiki and Noah took their seats in the red booth at the back of the car. it was not that loud on the train, but loud enough so people couldn't hear their conversation.
(magic)
The train rumbled along as Kiki and Noah took their seats in the red booth at the back of the car. it was not that loud on the train, but loud enough so people couldn't hear their conversation.
"Kiki, I need to talk to you about something.""What is it Noah?" she said putting down her book."Remember when we were six? when we used to have those little pretend adventures that you liked?"Yeah, why?""A long time ago you wanted for those adventures to be real, and I think I found a way."Noah held up the Caballa island poster."Come and compete in the Caballa island contest, and win a fortune from Don callaver's stash. compete against others and grow stronger fighting monsters as you race the others to the finish. It's a great adventure, so don't miss out!"Kiki looked at the paper, and then Noah, and then the paper again. "Noah! Thank yo-""Attention passengers. the train track in front of us is broken, and there's no time to pull the break. please brace yourself for the impact."the train shook and toppled over again and again. Kiki could barely see what was happening, but she caught a glimpse of Noah, already out cold, and bleeding in several places. But before she could help him, everything went dark. (scene change! wee!)(Power)"hai! ay! cha!"Kristi screamed that as she punched the punching bag in front of her three times so hard, it ripped in half. Justin, on the other hand kicked it once and his foot went right through."beat that loser!"Justin was an immature person that justed loved to get on Kristi's nerves. If Kristi heard one more insult today..."That's right, you can't! 'cause you're a GIRL!That REALLY got Kristi flared up, and every other girl in the gym. Kristi held back her urge to kill justin, but no one else had the willpower."AAH! HELP! AIIIIEEEEE!"Kristi chuckled as she heard that. She picked up her bags and began to leave when she spotted a poster for something called Caballa island. It said that there were plenty of things to train on. something to make her better than justin. but little did she know, Justin was going to Caballa island as well, but she'd have to find out later.(to be cointinued)I know, it probably sucks. i just felt like writing. :(
"Kiki, I need to talk to you about something."
"What is it Noah?" she said putting down her book.
"Remember when we were six? when we used to have those little pretend adventures that you liked?
"Yeah, why?"
"A long time ago you wanted for those adventures to be real, and I think I found a way."
Noah held up the Caballa island poster.
"Come and compete in the Caballa island contest, and win a fortune from Don callaver's stash. compete against others and grow stronger fighting monsters as you race the others to the finish. It's a great adventure, so don't miss out!"
Kiki looked at the paper, and then Noah, and then the paper again.
"Noah! Thank yo-"
"Attention passengers. the train track in front of us is broken, and there's no time to pull the break. please brace yourself for the impact."
the train shook and toppled over again and again. Kiki could barely see what was happening, but she caught a glimpse of Noah, already out cold, and bleeding in several places. But before she could help him, everything went dark.
(scene change! wee!)
(Power)
"hai! ay! cha!"
Kristi screamed that as she punched the punching bag in front of her three times so hard, it ripped in half. Justin, on the other hand kicked it once and his foot went right through.
"beat that loser!"
Justin was an immature person that justed loved to get on Kristi's nerves. If Kristi heard one more insult today...
"That's right, you can't! 'cause you're a GIRL!
That REALLY got Kristi flared up, and every other girl in the gym. Kristi held back her urge to kill justin, but no one else had the willpower.
"AAH! HELP! AIIIIEEEEE!"
Kristi chuckled as she heard that. She picked up her bags and began to leave when she spotted a poster for something called Caballa island. It said that there were plenty of things to train on. something to make her better than justin. but little did she know, Justin was going to Caballa island as well, but she'd have to find out later.
(to be cointinued)
I know, it probably sucks. i just felt like writing. :(
ah, nevermind. no one's actually reading this anyway.
i might start back up if someone actually comments and starts reading this.
People are reading this thread, dont be like that, my thread hasnt got any replies but loads of people have read it! So, just because you feel sad, i am writing this!
P.S; I LIKED YOUR STORY!
(sense)
*CRASH*
“Ian, be careful with those! That was from the ancient Mayan ruins!”
“Sorry, Sarah. I’m just really sleepy and I can’t focus on anything.”
“Why would you be sleepy? I do all the excavating in this pit!”
“You don’t know what I do after this.”
“Aigh! I need to take a break, you keep digging.”
Sarah set off towards the tent, still mumbling to herself. Ian jumped into the pit and took out his drill. He switched the power to ON and started to drill right into the center, which Sarah always told him not to do, because there’s more to be found where they hadn’t dug. Ian switched the drill to OFF and went to the shallower parts of the pit. He continued to drill but stopped when he spotted something red. He took out his brush and got the sand off of it, and picked it up. It was a poster for a cabbala island contest, the prize being a fortune and an extremely rare jewel called Harkon. Ian rushed into the tent and showed the poster to Sarah.
“We should compete. If we win, we’ll be millionaires and have the rarest jewel in the world in our hands!”
“So it’s decided?”
“Yes.”
“What about this giant pit right here?”
“I guess we’ll have to fill it back up.”
“*sigh* More work.”
(we’re almost done. Just charm left.)
(Charm)
“Let’s all thank supermodel Casey for coming into class today.”
“Thank you, Casey!”
“And thank you Max, for inviting me. You too, Mr. Jefferson. I’ll be on my way. Enjoy your free tickets to my next show!”
(30 minutes later)
The school bell rang and children gushed out of classrooms like a dam bursting into an empty trench. Max was just about to head out to the bus stop and go home, when he saw Casey covered in grease and dirt.
“What the I love you! happened to you?”
“the valet got a flat tire and I tried to fix it myself. We ended up getting 3 more.”
“Where do you live? I can show you how to get there.”
“1987 W. Charleston avenue.”
“That’s close to my house. Come on. I’ll pay your bus fare.”
The two hopped on the bus and waited for it to start moving again.
“Wait, what about your valet?”
“He knows how to get back.”
The bus rolled off. A rich lady noticing the oil stains on Casey’s dress showed her a poster.
“If you win, you’ll be able to buy all the clothes you want, and not be poor anymore.”
Casey was about to give the lady a piece of her mind when Max held her back and took the poster.
“Casey, this is perfect.” He whispered. “You could become more of a millionaire and I could get rich. But there’s one thing. The boat leaves tomorrow, so you’ll miss your show. Do you want to do this?”
Casey nodded.
“Then pack your bags. We’re going to Caballa island.
End of chap. 1
Charm was actually pretty hard. but they'll be on the island soon enough.:P
:) whoop dee doo you got the cake from GLaDos
ThE CakE iS a LiE