Haven't written a story in months so constructive critcism is much approved (>' ')b

Chapter 1~ Refined Suicide

A bright sun rises up, brightening the entire apartment complex in the small urban area of Tokyo known as Sotaku. The trees swayed back and forth to the small winds picking up. A young man wakes up from the bright sun in his eyes in his small messy room. He gets back and puts on his jacket and shorts and opens his window, letting in the fresh air. As his eyes get accustomed to the new day, they widen at the sight before him. A large object floating overhead catches his eyes and as it comes closer, the wind picks up around him. The young man quickly slams his window shut and runs to his door and locks it. He slids to the floor and sighs deeply. Suddenly, his door is burst open, sending him flying into his small kitchen. A large dark man floats in, looking back and forth. The young man grabs random things in his kitchen and tosses it at the figure, but they dissolve within contact.

"What the hell are you!?" shouts the young man.

"Hahaha, you who hides inner destruction should very well know me!" shouted the figure. It slowly starts to move closer to the young man, as he falls the floor in fear and crawls away. Everything goes black.....

The young man is awaken in a small room, completely white. As he stands up, collecting himself, someone nearby calls to him.

"Taeo, have you awoken yet?" said the voice. The young man looks over and sees a tall man with a long white beard sitting a in chair next to small desk. A chair appears before the young man and the bearded man signals to sit down, so he reluctantly does so. "So how are you doing Taeo?" asked the bearded man.

"My name isn't Taeo...." said the young man. "It's A... but he is interrupted.

"Ahh yes, your name is Ayrii (Aww-ree)" said the bearded man. "Do you have any idea where you are and who I am?"

"Of course not!!!"shouted Ayrii. "I just got attacked by some.....thing and i ended up here!" He stood up running to the desk, slamming his hands down upon it. "What the hell is going on here!?"

"Now now, calm down Ayrii," said the bearded man reassuringly. "I will explain everything." The man stood up, his hands behind him and paced around the room slowly. "To put it simply, you are dead."

"WHAT!!!???" screamed Ayrii.

"Please, do not interrupt me," said the bearded man sternly. "You died in your sleep sadly. This figure that you saw was a demon. There are many demons who lurk in this world. They find those who have died recently, trying to bring them into their lair to make them do their bidding. But you were saved. Something inside of you protected you from this demon. But this was mere luck. He will be after you again, Thanatos, the Reaper. I am a Seraph, Aurion, and i rule the heavens above you. Thankfully i was able to find you before your protection wore off. But right now you have a decision to make.

"What is it then?" asked Ayrii reluctantly.

"You have a choice to make on where you will reside," said Aurion, sitting down again in his chair. "You may live here, a wandering spirit roaming the halls of Heaven, watching those who are still alive. Or, you may reside in a new world. Many who have died are allowed to live there. The Island known as Caballa. Many adventure may await you there if you choose to find them or not. Sadly, this also means you must die again to be brought there.

"Would i need to make that decision right now?" asked Ayrii

"Unfortunately, yes," Aurion replied.

"I'll do it then....." said Ayrii looking down at the ground. "I'll go to Caballa." Man dying twice in 1 day, never thought that could happen, he thought. Suddenly, the room went black and he appeared in an empty room. A book appeared before him on a little desk, so he decided to open it. The words appeared.....

The path you choose at this point will forever mark your life on this bright and promising new land. At that moment, 4 weapons layed before him. When he moved his hand over them he saw more words appear in the book. The large blade signifies brute strength and courage. The staff signifies wisdom and knowledge. The gun signifes stealth and speed. The short sword signifies endurance and flexibility. Suddenly the room went red and a weapon was thrust to him and he fell out into an abyss.

Ayrri woke up hearing the sound of a beach. He felt the wet sand around him and opened his eyes to see a bright coastline. He stood up brushing off excess sand and noticed his new clothes. a small jacket, shorts and a clean gun with ammo strapped to his side. Ayrii's journey began....

Sorry if i made any typos. Too lazy to go back and check >.>. I'll update when i can. (>' ')b

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"We accept the love we think we deserve everyday~Wallflower~

8o Gramps writing a story? XD It's been a long time since you've wrote one.

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Credit to aisoyoko(sigs/avatar), kiddy(sig), and aeriyhx (sig).

Finally someone replied x.x i was starting to think everyone hated it o.e;;

next chapter up sometime this week (or later today if i get bored)

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"We accept the love we think we deserve everyday~Wallflower~

Cant wait to see more ^^

Love reading stories 

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LIES~! You crossed the line. Started your own demise
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Woops ^^;; missed doing this for a week.

Chapter 2: Fire Starters

Ayrii walked towards the small little beach town, noticing many people with weapons and whatnot. He soon saw a large group of people crowding in a circle, so he ran there to see what was going on.

"You really think you can take me on huh?"said a large man with a sword strapped to his back, crossing his arms and smirking at his attacker.

"Your the one who burnt down my tent!" shouted the smaller man with a long sword slung across his waist and a card showing from beneath his sleeve. "You and your dam group have been terrorizing everyone around the island and now you attack new people?"

"We'll see who's stronger," said the man calmly. In a flash, they disapeared and the crowd dispersed. Ayrii looked around and noticed all of the people looked much less composed than the two earlier. "What is this place....." he thought to himself. Suddenly, someone from behind grabbed him and brought him to their face.

"Just play along," said the person. It was a young woman, about the same age as Ayrii. She leaned in and kissed him. Ayrii jumped back very surprised and red-faced.

"See i have a boyfriend, so leave me alone!" shouted the girl at another young man nearby.

"Nooooooo!" as the boy ran away crying, *dramatic music plays*

"Hehe sorry about that, that guy wouldn't leave me alone,' said the girl to Ayrii. Ayrii walked up, still a little astonished.

"It's.....alright," replied Ayrii, feeling a little nervous. "My name's Ayrii by the way."

"My name's......Rein!" replied the girl smiling happily. "So i guess you're new here too?"

"Umm yea...,"replied Ayrii. "Don't really know what to do right now."

"Follow me then," said Rein. She walked off towards a glowing circle and disapeared. Ayrii seeing this inched away there and was surrounded by bright lights until he found himself in a new area. He noticed many small little furry animals bouncing about.

"You see those?"asked Rein. Ayrii nodded. "Shoot them!" With what!?" asked Ayrii taking out his gun and noticing he had no ammo. "Fine fine, take these" as she threw him a few bullets. "How do i do this?" asked Ayrii."Here let me do it for you," said Rein as she grabbed his hands and put in the ammo into his gun.

"Ok now shoot" said Rein. Ayrii aimed at one of the little critters and shot. The bullet hit, but it saw him and went in to attack. "Oww"said Ayrii as he was hit by the little furball on it's tail. "Run away and keep shooting till it goes down" said Rein sitting on a rock nearby and watching happily.

Ayrri ran back a little and continued to fire. The enemy eventually died and disapeared into the air. "That was exciting," said Ayrii as he layed down on the sand. "Well it's your first time i guess" said Rein. "Here take these" She handed him a small pouch with more ammo and some coins. "What are these? Ayrii asked. "It's money, well galders. Use them to buy whatever you need. I only gave you about 10k though"replied Rein

Suddenly, a large fire appeared around Ayrii as he jumped up in fright. Rein looked up and saw the man with the large sword on his back from before. "Garen! Stop it! Don't hurt him!" yelled Rein. "You're getting soft Rein....fine, he's a weakling anyways," replied the large man. He waved his arm and the fire dispersed. Ayrii looked up too. "What the hell was that for!?" he shouted. He shot at the man, but he carelessly dodged it. "You inferior kid!" He ran towards him with his sword raised high, but suddenly Rein jumped in the way and blocked it with her long dagger. "Please, don't hurt him Garen," said Rein. "Ugh this place is full of trash, said the man. "We're leaving Rein."

Rein turned around and took Ayrii's hand. "Hold onto this for me ok?" asked Rein. She kissed Ayrii on the cheek and she disapeared in a flash. He looked at his hand and saw a small little gray machine. He slid it into his pocket and walked forward. "Looks like i've got some hunting to do!" said Ayrii.

Hopefully i can update more often ^^;;

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"We accept the love we think we deserve everyday~Wallflower~

Heh double post blah

I'll update some other time. Feels kinda bad not having people post. Oh well, i'll keep writing anyways.~

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"We accept the love we think we deserve everyday~Wallflower~

Yay~ ^_^ A new chapter~

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Credit to aisoyoko(sigs/avatar), kiddy(sig), and aeriyhx (sig).

Chapter 3- Fear of Sleep

Ayrii awoke in a panic as he heard the screams of others around him. He ran out of his tent and saw a large fire burning in the middle of a small campsite. He started to run away but a large shadow loomed above him and crushed him.

Ayrii woke up on the soft sands of the beach known as Desert Beach. His dreams have been becoming very ominous lately. He got up and walked over to the teleport operator and went into town. Paradise was crowded with low lvl people and on occasion a very high lvl came running by. Many venders crowded by the shop as he walked by. He went into the shop but heard a loud shriek. He looked over and saw a tall young man trying to touch a tall young woman who was backing off slowly. Ayrii ran over and bashed the young man over his head knocking him out. "This is the same guy who was flirting with Rein...." thought Ayrii.

"Thank....you..." said the young woman softly still a little shooken up. "Your welcome," said Ayrii happily. He kicked the unconscious body and the buffalo was still out cold. "What's your name?" asked Ayrii. "You're not gonna hurt me right....?" said the young woman backing off a bit. "Of course not!"said Ayrii reassuringly. She looked up at Ayrii and blushed a bit. "My name's.....Celia..." answered the young woman. "My name's Ayrii," replied Ayrii.

"So why was this guy messing with you?" asked Ayrii. "I sold him something and he kept looking....at me and......eventually he wanted me to be his girlfriend," Celia replied. "If you hadn't come and hit him, he would've......" Celia walked over to the bank and took something out. "Here take this Ayrii." She handed Ayrii a bright golden hat. "These are a little hard to get now, but it'll help you alot. "Thank you," said Ayrii grinning widely at Celia, but she looked away to not be embarassed.

"I'm guessing your not too high a lvl?" asked Celia. They went out into the town and over by some tall trees and sitting down in the shade. "Yea, i'm still getting there, but i train everday," Ayrii replied. "By the way, do you anything about these fires that keep randomally showing up?"

Celia jumped up and walked away a bit. "Oh.....that," said Celia softly. Ayrii got up and walked towards her. "You know something huh?" asked Ayrii. Celia sighed and turned around. "They're called the Wyverns, like how dragons breathe fire," said Celia. "They go around and start fires and terrorize anywhere they can. No one knows why and The GM's have been after them for months, but they always get away." Celia sat down again and looked down at the ground somberly. "My.....brother is in there group....., he won't listen to me so he just does what he wants....." At that moment, a fire lit up the ground near them and a young man appeared. "I told you to stop talking about us!" shouted the young man. "Lyte! Please.....just stop it already," shouted Celia. "Shut up already! You can't control me!" shouted Lyte. He made a large fireball and tossed at them, but the fireball veered off to the side.

"What the hell!?" shouted Lyte, but he was suddenly blown back a few yards. He got up completely bewildered. He took out his staff and a whole of large arrows appeared and shot out at Ayrii and Celia, but then a figure jumped in front of them and the arrows were shattered. The figure was a young man with white hair and clothes and glasses. He turned around and smiled at Ayrii then disapeared. "Grrr i'll get you some other time!!!" shouted Lyte and he disapeared as well.

Celia fell to the ground and started to cry. Ayrri walked over and hugged her.

A few days past and Ayrii hadn't seen Rein or Celia at all. He was starting to get a little lonely, but at least he was slowly getting stronger. He walked into the shop and saw a young man looking everywhere around the shop. Ayrii walked over to him and asked him what he was doing. "I lost my money....." replied the young man. "I had it all with me and i hid it somewhere in the shop, someone must've taken it." "I can give you some if you need it," said Ayrii handing him about 10k. "Thanks man!" said the young man loudly and hugged him happily. "My name's Arte," said the young man. He noticed a small sword around his waist to the side and a smal shield on his back.

After that, Ayrii and Arte trained everyday together, Arte was a good tank against really tough enemies and Ayrii could take them out faster. At least Ayrii isn't alone anymore.

Thanx for reading (>' ')b

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"We accept the love we think we deserve everyday~Wallflower~

u_u Good story. Tho :X you should put a character list so it wont be confusing.

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Credit to aisoyoko(sigs/avatar), kiddy(sig), and aeriyhx (sig).

I introduce a new character like every chapter so i don't wanna spoil anything ^^;;

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"We accept the love we think we deserve everyday~Wallflower~