Name:sakuno
Gender:male
Wepon; scythe
Type of magic; offensive. darkness special spell: dark wave
Personality: very emo but can be happy once in a while
Age: 16
“You hear that? The boy asks what the problem is.” The entire group then broke into loud laughter.
“Come on, just spill it.”
“Our problem! Our problem is that W.U. does not care what happens to us. They force us to pay heavily each month, make us give them too much of our crops, ignore our request of help… The problem is that W.U. is worthless. We no longer obey W.U. we are now on our own.”
“Come on now! Don’t go overboard there. Come on, what can I do to fix this.”
“Fix! It is too late for you to FIX!”
“Anything at all too change your mind.”
“There is noting a weakling like you can do to help.”
“WEAK! I’m an entire army on my own here. Bring it on, I can defeat anything.” The man than went out muttering among themselves. We could send him to beat that monster. Yeah! It’ll solve one of our problems. Not to mention of getting him out of here. The men soon fell quiet and turned back towards Seth. “Alright then. Beat that monster out there in the caves that keep ravaging our farms and maybe well… consider it. To change our minds that is.”
“haha! Now were talking. So what is it.”
“We call it a Kull. There huge beasts. Other than that, its your problem to deal with.”
“What! That’s it… Fine, ill be back.” With that, Seth set off in the opposite direction of the town’s gate. A couple of minutes later he came up to an entrance of a cave. He barely entered a few feet’s before he heard what seem the snoring of a loud animal. “Well, im going to get a descent fight out of it.” With that he began to run inside the gate.
Taking turns right and left. Skulls of animals littered the floor. Few rotten fruits lay around. He continues on a path that seemed to get even more littered with bones and rotten fruits. A few more turns and he comes up to a large room, in the center lay a sleeping animal. Seth walk up to it and hopes to catch it asleep. The animal alerted at the sound of foot steps, stood up and looked at Seth.
It looked at him for a few seconds before standing on two feet and unleashing a loud roar that filled the room.
“Dang! This thing must be at least nine feet or more.” Said Seth as he saw the human like form stand up. It stood there for another few seconds before coming back on four and charging Seth straight on. It mouth open, revealing his big teeth, horns ready to stab Seth, and its tail waving helplessly by the sudden rush of wind.
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(C) of aisoyoko "Good and Evil dosent exist. Just what you believe."
Read the Story of Count blood in Trickster Lore by LTG
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If i remeber right.... the GM's dont like forums posts/topics to have posts with "Bump." I think they delete the topic of the one that has it.
Also, seeing as how not that many people are entering the contest. Than ill just continue the story as normal, but when i get to lucian again, then the winner well be picked.
Hundreds of thoughts flashed through Seth’s mind as the Kull approached, head held low and horns straight and pointed at the center of Seth’s chest. The Kull rushed on right by Seth as he barely managed to side step to the left, few inches away from the Kull’s horns.
“Woahh! That could have been deadly.” He said out loud as he readied himself for the Kull’s next run. The Kull came running at him several times, horns locked on Seth’s chest, Seth barely managing to dodge the horns by mere inches.
“I barely think of something before I have two extra holes on me.” Thinking a way to fight back, Seth thought of jumping on the Kull when he came charging at him again. The Kull readied himself again for another run at the visitor of his cave. It charged Seth with every ounce of the Kull set to kill the Seth. Seth started to jump as the Kull was no more than three feet away, only to be stopped as the Kull raised its right massive hand and struck Seth, sending him flying a few feet before crashing into the wall of the cave.
“Ha-ha. Didn’t see that one coming.” Seth said in a loud voice once he spit out some blood. “Ok, so the animal is smarter than it looks.” Said Seth as he staggered to get up with the help of his sword. The Kull mimicked Seth for he too stood on two and started to run towards Seth. “??? Huh! So it can run on two. Ok! New battle plan, fight this Kull thing as if fighting a human… a pretty strong human… and massive.”
Seth began to charge the Kull as well, Sword held high and ready to slice what ever was in front of it. Seth’s sword bounced back at his side as it smashed with the Kull’s arm with a sound of metal hitting metal ‘clink’.
“Oh come on now! What am I fighting now? A steel wall.” Seth went charging as the Kull and giving blows of blows, only to be stopped as the Kull parried every hit with its arms. Minutes have passed as Seth went on giving and dodge blows from the Kull. Kull seemed to keep up with Seth in every step. The strength of the Kull held and seemed to stay while Seth’s seemed to lower at every blow that he gave.
“This thing has to have a weakness somewhere. Maybe like a bb…” Seth stopped as he saw a medium size batch on the Kull’s back. “Maybe that’s it. It shows flesh after all.” Seth went back charging at the Kull from the back. The Kull seemed to have known to what Seth was going to do so as to quickly turning around and hitting Seth and sending him to a wall again.
Spiting blood, Seth got up again with the help of his sword and began to talk out loud again. “I at least got a cut.” The Kull got back on four and came charging Seth, small trails of blood coming from the back of its head and flowing to its left side.
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Its good! But you shouldn't ask my advice really, because I am younger than you >_>
Virushen: Its good! But you shouldn't ask my advice really, because I am younger than you >_>
dosnt really matter if your younger. I mean, how can a bad writer get better if he always dose
the same thing because he dosnt take advice of others cause there younger. Also, underestimating one self can be
a bad thing you know. You cant get far if you keep thinking your too weak.... althoughi kinda do that myself >.>
Anyways, i would still like your advice. Be it good or bad. After all, im trying to make my story liked by all and not just the
ones that have my taste.
The Kull came straight onto Seth. With the weakened state, Seth only managed to avoid one of the horns but got himself locked in between the Kull’s horns. “Well?!?! This isn’t ggoodd.” He finished the last word as he was lifted above the Kull’s head and launched half across the cave. Seth staggered to his feet before he had to jump as the Kull came to ram into Him. He landed and quickly turned around to see the Kull turning around.
The Kull turned around and stood on two again. “Why do you come into my cave?” Spoke the Kull with a deep voice.
“What! You can speak?” Replied Seth with a face of shock.
“Yes I can speak! Do you take me to be noting more than an animal?”
“Well… yes. I mean the villee…” Seth was cut off as the Kull began to speak.
“Let me guess, the people from the village told you to come and kill me. A monster, animal, or the like.”
“Well. Yes, kinda I guess. But why did you attack me if you could speak.”
“Ha! I defended my self. You were most likely going to kill me while I was asleep.”
“errr… um..”
“Psh.. your kind are all the same. Violent things you are. Always taken things without the thought of the others.”
“What about you? Your attacking the village.”
“Attack! Ha! I must survive don’t I. I need food and you creatures have come up to my land and taken my source of food. All im doing is taken back what is mine.”
“Then why do you not just talk with them and settle this peacefully.”
“Peacefully! I tried that once. The minute I showed myself, your kind attacked me.”
“Then come with me so we can try to settle this.”
“I’m done trying with you all. I only stopped to find out why you attacked. As far as I know, it’s the same reason as the others.” The Kull became silent and began to run towards Seth with its massive arms held high.
“Oh come on! Lets talk this out.”
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good job lucian