Virushen's fan fiction: The Darkness Within

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Sneak Peek for the sequel

 

-          I will most likely open a new thread for the sequel

-          It will most likely take place 1 year after the events in darkness within

-          First chapter will be the last battle between the now dark lord Long and Necromance

-          Of course Necromance is defeated, or there won’t be a story

-          Long got rid of the whispers when he became a dark lord. But as indirectly said in darkness within, his soul was destroyed and he became all evil and cold

-          Flora has become a primadonna. She became famous all over Caballa Island

-          She found Duffi a little back ago. Together, they started a new adventure

-          When Flora found Long, she was so surprised by the attitude change in him, and tried to persuade him that he must turn back to his old ways, become a priest, and save his village

-          Flora and Duffi was informed that Long’s father has contracted the comatose disease too, and basically everyone in the village has. This does not worry Long a bit

-          Flora and Duffi found a new companion, a lonely fox.

-          The title, will be another competition for readers to decide too. I will announce that when I am back

 

Note: Please do not be surprised by the sudden ending to Darkness within. It’s not because I ran out of ideas. it’s just for new readers to read the whole story, without having to wait for new chapters until after I came back. And I apologize if the story resembles harry potter series too much :P

Thank you Blushi for the background~

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Can't wait for more ! :D

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=( its over time to cry sob anyway look what I found on the GC fourms

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RANDOM HOMER!

^ the kingdom knights thing is from the GC fourms

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YEY!!!! I WANT MORE!!

 

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Thank you for updating (^_^) It was very tragic ending... but it suits the sequel very much! I like how the characters will develop in the sequel, wonder how the fox will be like?
The story really gives a strong feeling of sadness (that is a good thing!), and it feels like Long can never reach light again, very much how in game once a mage chooses dark, they can't be light again.. (AKA being too lazy to restart ) Lucky he has Flora though, she won't give him up (^_^) (...I hope)
Sorry if my reply is... long? (._.); Basically -- The story is very interesting! Hope the sequel is out soon, we would all like to read more! \(^_^)/

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I just now noticed the sequal's name is a contest like this one

^ the kingdom knights thing is from the GC fourms

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HI VIRUSHEN! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR MORE OF YOUR AWESOME FAN FIC!!! sob

Anyway, I might make a trickster fanart comic, a long one....and I might put some stuff from your fanfic. I'm asking if I can, cause if you don't, I won't do it, but it would be a big problem for me.T_T

 

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HI VIRUSHEN! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR MORE OF YOUR AWESOME FAN FIC!!! sob

Anyway, I might make a trickster fanart comic, a long one....and I might put some stuff from your fanfic. I'm asking if I can, cause if you don't, I won't do it, but it would be a big problem for me.T_T

 

Of course you can! In fact I like it. I will be more than glad if you do so as long as you put a tiny little acknowledgement that the character or event belongs to me (ok not entirely, because I write about trickster :P)

thanks anyway

and I might be writing the sequel soon as I am now back to check things out. I may leave if it doesnt suit me :(

Thank you Blushi for the background~

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Thanks a lot! I'm just gonna do your idea on the ghostly whisper thing, cause I will do something like that on Azhi's past, I'm making a fanfic on the character pets. And I like Azhi's past the most.

Of course when I do that, I'll be advertising your fanfic. :}

 

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I may include the soul seed idea into the sequel, once I finished the soul seed quest (if I ever do)

Thank you Blushi for the background~

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