Well, i already have my story fully typed out, so i just copy and paste =P
Anyway, I'm going to continue to finish posting my story, and you guys will not see me in game, since i'm quitting TO due to their... crappy updates -.-
[Chapter 36 - Return of the Planets]
Back at Caballa School, Liange, Bakaeep and Chio started surveying the laboratory. They went into the secret room, and found lots of machines.
"I think we should call Tykro to take a look at these stuff," Chio said.
"Good idea,"Bakaeep replied. "This is his field of speciality."
Chio took out her communicator, and gave a call to Tykro. Tykro then headed towards Caballa School, still holding the rocks. Upon reaching the secret room, he dropped all the stones and stared at all the machines. "Those machines... It's technology is one that I have never came across before...!"
"Let me study these for a while." Tykro continued. "I maybe able to figure out how these works."
After a few hours, Tykro stood up. "Yup. I've got it. This is a secret technology, not from our world, or should i say, our dimension."
After playing around with the controls, Tykro managed to start it. Making sure that it was still working, it rewired it to give a oppsite effect. When he was done, he fired it up. The machine gave off an energy, similar to the one from before. It fired up, and landed back down on the school.
Everyone ran to the previous room and saw a middle age man in Mad Ray's place. "Thank... you..." he mumbled before he passed away. They then stood there and prayed for him...
Liange and Bakaeep then exited the laboratory and went to the corridors and the classrooms. Few moments later, they returned, all happy and excited. "It's worked! Everyone is back to normal! They are just unconcious though."
"That's great!" Chio exclaimed. "Let's evacuate them immediately."
"You guys go ahead," Tykro said. "This machine here... Looks like it could do something usseful. I want to check it out."
Chio, Liange and Bakaeep brought everyone out of Caballa School, and to Oops Wharf. They placed the victims under Angii's group's care. It took them a lot of trips to evacuate them, and several hours. I was close to midnight when they evacuate everyone. And that was about five hours.
They returned back the the secret room, to see Tykro placing the rocks in the machine. "Step back," Tykro warned.
Firing up the machine, the rocks started to glow, and this time, there isn't any dark aura getting in the way. The light grew so bright that it blinded everyone. Finally, when the light died down, they saw Mars, Venus, Saturn, Pluto and Mercury standing around them.
"What happened to us...?" Mercury asked.
"I do not know," replied Mars. "Who are these... Humans?"
"Our friends brought you back, from the hands of the evil people," Tykro said.
"I see..." Pluto said. "Can you be trusted?"
"We do not want to suffer that pain, with the weird aura from before...." Saturn continued.
"We swear," Chio assured them. "We are trying to save this world."
Chio, Liange, Bakaeep and Tykro led the way and brought the planetary warriors back to Oops Wharf. When Angii's group saw them, their first instinct was to draw their weapons.
"Drop your weapons!" Liange shouted. "They are friendly now."
Tykro called for reinforcements from the monster guild and medical staff came to aid the victims. Then everyone went back to the monster guild.
They entered a giant auditorium, where they asked the planetary warriors what had exactly happened.
Chio's Trickster Remixed: Trickster Forum Chio's Blog
Well DevilAurora, I am glad that we will at least be able to see the conclusion of your story. I am just sad that Ntreev has forced your hand on the subject of leaving.
I will be sincere, I hold you in high regard, since you always used to reply to me, in the few months I was here. Due to this I want to ask a favor of you. If you are able to do so, I will let you go on your way with at least this good memory.
I have posted volume one of my ongoing crossover series known as "The Defender Chronicles" in the off topic section of the forum. I even put the mid-story between Volume one and two. The reason I did this is because I was looking for critiques for my work, since with them I can make my story better.
Sadly, in the 2 to 3 years that I have been working on this seires, I have come to understand that nobody takes crossovers seriously, since the only comments I get are from close friends or internet friends. I dont even get flamed or insulted about them. Now I wonder, are my stories so bad that nobody has wants to even comment?
Regardless, I was wondering if you could read my story and give me a critique, and when I say that I mean dont hold back on it. If its bad, tell me where you tink I went wrong, and I will try to modify for the future. All I ask is for a serious critique from you before you disappear. And in advance, thanks for all of your help. I wish you the best of luck in your life.
Alright, i will take a look in this weird 2 hours maintenance. Waste of time maintenance -.-
[Chapter 37 - Declaration of War]
Mars started the story:
Every thousand years, when the planets align, we always gather for some meeting at a random place in the universe. Last year, when the planets aligned, obviously, we were suppose to meet.
However, only the five of us gathered. Hence, we started to scout the universe, searching for the missing four, when we reached the proximity of Earth, and that is where we faced our strongest enemy ever, Karan.
We faced off with him, and out battle lasted for days. Even with the five of us, we were no match. He wanted to capture us, for his evil plans, when we realise why the other four didn't gathered. Apprentally, they found out about this plot and were unable to contact the five of us.
Just when we were at out limit, Karan made a mistake. From that mistake, we managed to escape to the the closest planet, Earth. We were already weakened in battle, hence we changed back into out meteorite forms, and crashed down into Earth.
We were slowly recovering, when Karan's minions found us. Then we realise something. Poseidon, the guardian and warrior of Earth, was already held captive by Karan. Among the nine of us, the sons and daughters of Alpha and Omega, Poseidon is the strongest.
We were unable to do anything as we were imprisoned in our meteorite form. They used some dark art to seal our power, disabling us. The weird device they used forced use to change forms.
The last thing we remembered was fighting you guys. Our objective now is to rescue Poseidon.
"... And we apologise for what we had done..." Venus said, as she finish off the story.
"I see... " Aurora replied. "You guys had gone through a really tough time."
Suddenly, thunder was heard, and the wind became very strong that it blew open the main door of the Monster Guild. Everyone rushed out to see what was going on. Then, in the dark sky, holograms of the the evil side appeared. They started introducing themselves.
"My name is Kitasen."
"I'm Shimega."
"Kitsune."
"Pharrell."
"Levy."
"Tuvis."
"Tuvis?!" Everyone exclaimed in shock. "What's going on?!"
"We are the future rulers of this world. This dimension and the other. And the universe. Take this as our declaration of war. We will destroy those who stand in our way. We will destroy everything there is now, and build a new world! One where we are the rules! This time, darkness will prevail!" Kitasen continued.
The others started laughing, except for Tuvis. He was looking away from the others, and couldn't be bothered.
"What's going to happen now...?" Chio asked.
"Lycan..." Rosetta said softly, holding her hands at her chest, with her eyes closed, as tears formed at the corner of her eyes.
There's so much..since I last..visited..^o^;;... '^' I'll read it. -soon- -hopefully veryyy soon- -...hopefully tomorrow..-
Chiooo. D; I don't know you in-game (nor much even on the forum), but.. <.>... Meh, I won't keep you from quitting. I understand why you're quitting, so good luck on wherever you venture to next! <3
[Chapter 38 - The war begins]
The earth shook. Armies were starting their invasion all around Caballa. They came from all directions. Each of them led one army to invade Caballa.
Their army all consisted of Iron Knights and Brass Knights, with something extra.
Pharrell's army had Coal Mine Soldiers and he stormed through Aquarius. Tuvis' army had Personas and he used them to storm through Paradise.
Kitasen and Shimega's army has the Bone Magicians. Kitasen stormed through Oops Wharf, while Shimega went from the north, to storm through Tapasco.
Kitsune's army consisted of the Guard Ians and she stormed through Cabigal. As for Levy, her army has all they types of Coolems, and she stormed from Snow Hill down.
Their target, and destination was Megalopolis, Rose Garden and the Caballa Castle, since that is where everyone was. Once they meet at the center of Megalopolis, it will be time for a new world.
Among Kitasen's army, Lycan was there. There's no life in his eyes. His body was no longer covered with blue fur, but rather, black fur. Everyone of them held on to a chip of Poseidon's Blessing, a harkon piece. It glows in different colours beautifully. However, a ritual needed to be done. Five points around Caballa and one in the middle will create a glyph to activate the ritual. From that, Lycan's hidden power will be unleashed and they will take over the other dimension.
For now, they all have to reach Megalopolis first. The first five shards were already in place, and guarded by hordes of knights.
Chio and friends split up to confront them. Together, they had elite fighters from the disbanded Paladins that returned to join in the fight. Even at this point of time, Radiant's location was unknown to everyone.
Chio and Aurora went to confront Kitasen. Rwinna and Soul, as usual, went on to Kitsune. Angii and Bakaeep went to find Shimega. Veraca and Tykro set off to face Levy. Liange went to find Tuvis and HornedBull left to face Pharrell.
Chio and Aurora started cutting down Kitasen's army. But the numbers were too great. They were being pushed back, all the way from Oops Wharf, towards the gate. But, what Chio and Aurora doesn't know was, Rosetta was following them the whole time, Hoping to find Lycan.
The same went for the others. No matter how far away from Megalopolis they started the fight, they were all being pushed towards the centre of Caballa Island. There was totally no way of removing the harkon shards from the locations.
While everyone was busy fighting, the planetary warriors had infiltrated into Mirage Island, to look for Poseidon. As that was their only objective. They were met with a strong resistance from the monsters in the area. There were a giant horde of Golems in the area as well. At the Alteo construction site, they were confronted by a woman with long pink hair, wearing a dress, with black and red at the top and a pink skirt, with a rose in the front. She was holding on to a grass whip. However, she was limping out of the area.
"Help me..." she said weakly.
Then, the black aura enveloped her. She started screaming. The aura entered and left, and the cycle continued for a while. She was resisting the aura, but in the end, she wasn't strong enough, and the aura took total control. She started attacking the warriors, but they scattered and defeated her with one blow. As she fell to the floor, she smiled and mumbled weakly, "Thank... You..."
She disappeared and in her place, a rose started to grow.
"Rest well," Mars said, with his eyes close. "Rosepina."
o3o yay, great story, everyone is busy fighting ~ whats gona happen next? =OOOOOOO
next chap plsssssssss =D
xMrFlipFlop ~18x~ Priest xMrChaos ~221~ Cyber Hunter
~Credit to: ZomgAngela~ 8D
Forgot about it, but here's the next chapter xD
[Chapter 39 - Reminising the past]
Megalopolis is now surrounded by the army of monsters. The path behind them were all trashed. Rosetta ran around Oops Wharf area, and noticed that a lot of animals and people in the area were killed by Lycan, because of the claw marks. There was no mistaking it. Lycan was with Kitasen.
The monsters continued to advance. Although the front line of those army fall, there were many more behind.
Liange rushed through the horde of monsters and caught a glimpse of Tuvis. The stared at each other, and Tuvis lifted up his hand, and the movement of his army stopped. He approached Liange. "What do you resist us so much?"
"What?!" Liange shouted back. "Why are you fighting for evil and not for us?!"
"This is my fate. This is what i was suppose to do, the day my hometown got trashed. It has been decided."
"You are no longer the Tuvis we all knew. I think this leave me no choice..."
Liange drew her sword and attacked Tuvis. Tuvis defended it easily. They were dashing all over the place, with their swords clashing everywhere.
"This is just like old times, isn't it, Tuvis?! The time when we use to spar with each other in school?!"
"That's all in the past. You still lose to me because you still fight for the weak. And reminising makes one weak. As a fighter, we must overcome everything. Feelings is the barrier that separates the weak from the strong. With those feelings, you will never become strong, you will never defeat me!"
"I don't believe a word you are saying! How could you change so drastically from what you were before?! This is unacceptable! You aren't a bad person!"
Furious, and powered by Adrenaline, Liange's attack got fiercer, in hopes of bringing Tuvis to his right state of mind. Their swords clashed countless of times. Liange's Flamming Fist was often weakened by Tuvis' Tidal Slash. Even their Tetra Punch were on par.
"I see you have improved. But it isn't enough."
Liange pulled out another sword, which surprise Tuvis. This increase the amount of hits on Tuvis. Tuvis wasn't able to it all, and finally, Liange manage to send his sword flying, and hand another sword at Tuvis' neck.
"Dual swordplay. Where did you learn that?"
"It was something I picked up, after you said it was useless, back in school."
"Well, you got me. Aren't you going to finish the job?"
"I can't do it. You're my friend, in school and now. Furthermore, you are free of the dark aura..." Liange said, as she kept her sword.
"How naive..." Tuvis said. "Never show sympathy to an enemy."
Tuvis snatched one sword from Liange's hand and placed the blade at her neck.
"It ends now."
"If I can't prevent a friend from going to the wrong side, do I still deserve to live, Tuvis?"
Tuvis brought the blade down. "This is what i meant. Feelings make you weak. Forget it. You aren't worth my time. When you have discarded them, come and find me. Then, we will have an all out battle."
After saying that, Tuvis left the battlefield, and his army disappeared into thin air, leaving Liange standing alone at the direction of Paradise.
Credit to aisoyoko(sigs/avatar), kiddy(sig), Angel (sig), and aeriyhx (sig).