Go go continue writing!! XD
Too bad my friend can't on to help me drill T-T
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Chio, I was just reading all the chapters when I saw that a little people comment on it.
I can't really comment on it right then and there because words cannot express my thoughts. *cough* I'm getting cheesy *cough.
But really, I got excited and I'm still waiting for the next chapters, and my next entry XD.
Testing Sigs Temporarily.
Credit to aisoyoko(sigs/avatar), kiddy(sig), Angel (sig), and aeriyhx (sig).
Devilaurora: "Evolution!"Veraca changed into a tanned-skin, sexy beast. With her increased in attack speed and power, she was able to defeat more Quiems and Crows at the same time. But it was still too overwhelming.
"Evolution!"
Veraca changed into a tanned-skin, sexy beast. With her increased in attack speed and power, she was able to defeat more Quiems and Crows at the same time. But it was still too overwhelming.
XD That part somehow made me lol. SOO, I just got finished with most of my work and decided to drop in and read your fanfic.
Sweet story you have there. :D Btw, I'm not one to give constructive criticism, since, well, I suck at it. XD That's pretty much why I don't like to post in this section. I'd have nothing to say most of the time.
I'm anticipating the later on chapters, where I'm guessing the plot picks up and gets more entertaining as more characters come in. 83
Keep up the good work, I guess? :3
I tried to put my signature here, but Mother scolded me for getting ink on the screen, so I decided against it.
hehe chapt 7 :3
i thought shot was in like chapter 5 or 6? but nt much in it i guess D:
i start to hate that pic i drew XD i shall edit her but im keeping the hair short :3
IGN ETO: (fire/earth/soulmaster)bakaeep 23x, (ap/hv/diva)bakacat, (water/wind) bakawitchie 12x, JTO: (bunny)nana 3x,
L0Lzzzz:Chio, to make it simple for you, Shot want you to put him in he story like NOW ._.
XD
Naah, not really. Having a cameo appearance is OK with me.
Not bad, not bad. Keep up the good job. :P
I'll await the coming chapters.
Alright, i'm working on more of this xD
and here is part 8 =3
[Chapter 8 - Soki's Assault]
The Fire Golems started the fight. One punch from them created cracks in the ground. A single punch from them right on the boday would be fatal. Apart from their strength, their Mana Arrow can deal quite a lot of damage to Chio. Thankfully, Aurora has Mana Shield to protect them.
Chio retaliated.
"Tetra Punch!"
Using Tetra Punch, Chio knocked away 4 Fire Golems at once. The fourth Golem got the most damage. Chio and Aurora then continued to destroy the summons first. It didn't take too much time. Finally, it was time to face Soki. The Golems had created countless of cracks on the ground. Seem like there is a limited area of land to run about.
For starters, Soki send off a ShockWave. Chio and Aurora jumped up and dodged it easily, but Soki released a second ShockWave at them. Unable to dodge the second one, Chio successfully used Dash in midair, and manage to protect Aurora and herself with Guard. Chio only just made it. A single second of miscalculation would have been disastrous.
Soki swipe his staff at them. Chio stopped it with her bare fist and held it there. This gave Aurora a chance to attack.
"Arrow Rush!"
Soki was knocked back, and it staggered for a split second. In the process, Soki had released it's grip on his staff. Chio threw the staff away, far away from Soki's reach. Now they have the upperhand. Soki released a ShockVibe that stunned Chio and Aurora for a second.
"Continue the attack!" Chio shouted.
However, it seems this time, her punches and strikes weren't as powerful as before. Aurora's Magic skills also started to miss frequently. Chio and Aurora retreated for a moment and hid behind come of the crumbled walls in the area, and wait for the effect of ShockVibe to wear off. After a few minutes, the resumed their attack.
"Pumping Heart! Bull's Eyes! Hyper Beat! Aura of Haste! Guard!"
"Mana Shield! Mist of Mana! Aura of Mana! Gnome's Blessing!"
Chio advanced with caution. As she got nearer, Soki lifted up it's hand to attack. Right before contact, Chio used Dash, and came to a stop right in fornt of Soki. Then...
"Uppercut!"
The force from UpperCut, together with Counter Punch, was so great that it sent Soki flying. Aurora used the chance and unleased a barrage of Mana Arrow at it. Right before Soki landed, Aurora opened the ground with Earthquake. Soki held on tight to the edge of the cracks. The hole opened by Aurora was so deep that even Soki wouldn't survive. Aurora then used Dragon Storm on Soki's hand. As Soki lost his grip and fell, Chio executed another attack.
"Inferno Blade!"
Fire swords appeared and flew into the hole with high speed. They knew it made contact when the heard a loud roar, followed by an explosion.
Aurora started jumping up and down happily, but Chio took out her sword and pointed towards the trees nearby.
"Who's there? Show yourself!"
"Haha... So, you've noticed."
"Of course. I felt your presense from the beginning. Who are you?"
"Me?" The mysterious figure said as she walked out. "I'm someone you wouldn't want to meet. My name is..."
woot chapter 8 <33
nuu i still cant guess who is it i shall use some cheats *giggles*
go chio go i wan more stories o.O