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[Edit] Done with part 3 =3
But... So little people are looking in this thread of mine... It's saddening...
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[Chapter 3 - Spicy Treat]
"I have..." Kitsune was about to finish her sentence when they were interrupted by loud screams that came from the north of Paradise. The ground also started shaking, as though an earthquake as occured.
They all ran towards Beach Field 5 when they saw a huge figure at the horizon. Many people were running away from the figure, screaming. Being curious, Chio wanted to approach the giant figure, but was
held back by Aurora and Radiant. But out of nowhere, a Mercenary dashed out, pulling his sword from it's shealth. The figure kept advancing towards Paradise. Did that Mercenary fall to that... Thing...?
Few minutes later, they all noticed the Mercenary limping back. He mumbled, under his breath, before toppling to the ground. " Spi...cy-"
Radiant and Aurora imediatly started healing him.
"I'll bring him to town and take care of him." Radiant told Chio and Aurora. " See if you help the people running here, and possibly hold it back. From what he said, i think it's a Spicy Dragon."
"Spicy Dragon?!" Chio, Aurora and Kitsune shouted.
"I thought Spicy Dragons where only exclusive at Tapasco areas, and are also extremely rare?" Aurora asked, frantically. "How did it get here?"
"We have to investigate this, but for now, the safety of everyone comes first."
"Alright!" Chio said. "Lets go, Aurora. Will you be coming, Kitsu-?"
Kitsune has disappeared. But where she was, layed the Blood sword, possibly the one Chio had obtained from the Count Blood. Did she lose in the Boss Seals tally, or did she just dropped it? Chio didn't think that much, and just picked it up. The moment Chio wielded the sword, she felt a strong power surging through her. But it wasn't compounded with any attribute, so chio decided to keep it for another time.
Chio and Aurora hence ran to the front, to aid some of the injured people, and to join the frontline battle to stop the beast. But wait! The Spicy Dragon looked different. Giant wings, and the horns were bigger and glowing. Also, it seems to be twice... or thrice in size! A different breed? It was taking down fighters one by one, without breaking a sweat. One breath of fire could wipe out an area as big as a football field. However, 2 of the fighters seems to be doing well.
As the Spicy Dragon blew fire, the... Champion, having quick reflexes was able to use Dash to escape the area, but impressively, was able to help another Soul Master out of the predicament as well. The Dragon flinches for a split second, they took their chance and attack. Flash Cut, Uppercut, Arrow and Pheonix Rising were a great combination. It goes to show how much teamwork the two had in them. Even when they were unable to escape, the Champion was able to use Guard to protect herself and the Soul Master at the same time. A perfect combination.
Chio and Aurora ran up towards them.
"We are here to help prevent this beast from reaching the town." Aurora said. "Is there anything in particular we could do?"
"You, the Duelist." the Champion said. "Can you use Dash? If you can, bring your Soul Master friend and go around to it's back and attack it, and fight like how we are doing, but watch the tail. If not, just stay back."
"Alright, fine," Chio replied. "What's your na-"
"No time for introductions now!" the Champion snapped back. "Go!"
Chio then brought Aurora to the back to attack it. Being already tired from collecting Boss seals none stop, Chio decided to keep her distance.
"Piercing Wave!"
"Dragon Storm!"
After a volley of attacks, the Spicy Dragon only staggered a little. It would seem that whatever they are doing doesn't seem to be working. Suddenly, out of nowhere...
"Shadow!"
Clones appeared all around the Spicy Dragon, and they all attacked it once, to a big attack. It seemed to deal more damage. The Spicy Dragon seemed weaker. But the fight is long from over.
"Here to aid." the Gladiator said. "Let's go!"
After a giant volley of attacks, The Spicy dragon still hasn't fall! The fighters know they have to act fast. The Spicy Dragon is still advancing towards Paradise. The people of Paradise waits, wishing it will not reach. All hopes were pinned on the few fighters left.
"You're a Duelist, right?" the Gladiator asked Chio.
"Yeah."
"Good. Use Dash, and go up onto the Spicy Dragon. Bring me up as well. I've got a plan."
The Gladiator told Chio what to do, and told Aurora to stay behind as it could get dangerous. As soon as Aurora backed off, Chio executed Dash, and brought the Gladiator up, and stopped right on it's head.
"Keep your balance, Duelist! Now, do it!
"Infero Blade!" Chio and the Gladiator shouted.
Swords of fire appeared above the Spicy Dragon, drops down at hit it, dealing huge amout of damge at once. This attack made it fall to it's knees in pain. It seems the Spicy Dragon is reaching it's limit. However, Chio, the Gladiator and the Champion were already panting. They were all tired. Chio pulled the Blood sword out of her shealth and throw it to Aurora.
"Aurora! Catch! It also give a huge amount of Magic power as well. Use it to finish the Dragon off."
Aurora caught th sword, ran over to the other Soul Master and show the sword to her. She nodded her head, and held the sword in her hands. They started chanting their incantation. Right before the Spicy Dragon recovered...
"Arrow Rush!" the two Soul Master shouted together.
14 arrows, with a high concentration of Magic power flew out and hit the Dragon hard, right in his chest, as Chio and the Gladiator jumped off it's head. due to the power of the Blood Sword, the arrow dealt more damage then usual, defeating the Spicy Dragon. The Spicy Dragon then just fell to the ground motionless. They've won! They all cheered, along with the people within Paradise. The fighters then gathered around the two Soul Masters.
"Well done. I've underestimated your power, Duelist." The Champion said. "What's your name? And your name, Soul Master?"
"Chio. ChioBuneary. That's my close friend, Aurora. AuroraAngel."
"Nice to meet you. My name is Liange. That's my sister, Bakaeep. I look forward to seeing you in action again."
"Me me! I'm HornedBull." the Gladiator said excitedly.
Just as they were going to celebrate, the sky turned dark. Thunder was heard. Whirlpools were seen in the lakes around the fields. Then a figure from the sky appeared, floating in the sky. A human? No... What is that...?
"Don't rejoice, humans!" A voice boomed from the figure.
The figure became clearer. A human! He young man, but what's going on?
"Who are you?!" Chio shouted.
"My name is Karan! I'm the one who sent this Spicy Dragon on a rampage. I'm the one who made these monsters different, stronger! To be called Bosses! But... they were all defeated by you, mere human beings! That Spicy Dragon was my latest creation. The Spicy MK II! To be defeated by the five of you... It must mean you are strong. But you aren't strong enough to defeat me yet. The rampage will continue. Await my challenge, humans! Muahahaha!"
With that, Karan disappeared. The whirlpools subsided and the sky cleared. Even the body of the Spicy Dragon disappeared. What's going to happen now?
Excelent story DevilAurora. You even threw in Karan, a nice touch indeed. A few spelling errors, but nothing too big. Very well developed as well. Introduction in the beginning would have been good, but you pulled off chapter one well enough to compensate. Nothing beats jumping right into the action. I understand that you mentioned that your writing skills might not as be as they were in school, but I think that they are still very good
You guys are inspireing me to create my own fanfics based off my Trickster experience. I was working on the intro just a few minutes ago. If I can stop playing trickster for a while I will be able to post it. Once again, good work.
Finally someone else read it xD
Hmm... Thanks for the comments. I will try to slow down my typing a little to cut the typos to a minimum.
And jumping right to the action? Yeah, my teacher said to do that, to give an impact, cause she can't stand "It's a bright sunny morning" aanymore as an opening xD
Thanks again ^_^
I look forward to your fanfic as well
[Edit] And since i'm having my holidays now, i'm going to work on Part 4 xD
Nice story X3 thanks for helping me spend some time (and give me a reason to lay off training XD)
Maybe you can add me to the story... I'm taking Karan's side! XDD;
Now let me go and restart ;-; stupid Vista
Alright, someone to be a villain! Give me one of your character's name, and i will add it in the next few parts
Thank for volunteering xD
XD nice one chio :3 ya i n lia can be count as twins cos she's one day earlier then me in term of bdae :3
anyway need charm characters jus bring my cat :3 n hmm she;s a diva :3 n make her eep's sister XD :D
i wan to read more post :3 if not i wan sneak preview :3
[Chapter 4 - Saving Cabigal]
After what had happened, the group returned to town. They were greeted by Radiant at the entrance.
"I won't be able to join you on more of your quest." Radiant said. "I will be leaving with another group to investigate this incident. I look forward to seeing you all again."
After saying that, Radiant took out a PPD and teleported away. Hence, the group went to the Gate of Desert Beach to have a talk. They had to know what Karan is up too, and what other challenges will come. For now, Chio and Aurora has forgot about Kitsune. Everyone assume Karan is trying to take over Caballa Island, and use it to expand his reign of terror to the rest of the world. He has to be stopped. Everyone was silent. Noone spoke and were deep in thought, when they were interupted by a beeping sound. It came from Chio's bag.
Chio searched her bag, to find a... weird device which she had never seen before. The beeping suddenly stopped, and Radiant appeared on the screen of the device.
"Guys, I have new information for you. It seems that a Tenterlion is on the lose. It has hit the Gate and is slowly advancing towards Carbigal. The Paladins, a group of elites formed to protect Caballa Island that was just formed, are already in combat. They could use some help though. It seems Karan has buff this one up by a lot. Time is running out. Hurry."
"Alright, we are on our way," said Chio.
"Hang on, Chio," Liange said. "Let's battle this Karan-guy together. But to move around easier, we need a name for our team."
"How about... The Guardian Angels?" Bakaeep suggested.
"That's nice," HornedBull said, with Chio and Aurora agreeing with him.
"Alright then. Guardian Angels, Move out!" Chio shouted.
So, the Guardian Angels rushed to Carbigal. They were shocked at the state the Gate was in. The Item shop was smashed. The swamp in the centre was now... the shape of a giant foot print. Just how big is this Tenterlion?
They heard crashes deeper into the swamp, right in the direction of Cabigal. The Guardian Angels raced against time. When they reached, to their surprise, the Tenterlion was... easily 3 times bigger! Chio remembered the last time she fought against a Tenterlion. She was at least 2 feet shorter than it. But now, she was barely reaching it's knees of each leg! Bodies of some the Paladins lay motionless among the tress. Some of them were just injured. A few Cyber Hunters and Scientist were hiding on the trees, using Power Shot and Double Shot, but it seems to have little effect. The Guardian Angels werre than greeted by one of the Paladins' general. She introduced herself as Veraca.
"Who are you?" Veraca asked. "It's dangerous here. It's better if you evacuate with the rest of Cabigal right now."
"We're the Guardian Angels," Aurora said. "We're here to aid you in the fight. Our friend told us to come."
"No. Do not inter-"
"It's okay, Veraca." Radiant said, as he walked out from behind the trees. "I told them to come."
"But, are you sure...?"
"Yes. I have seen their abilities. They are strong."
"Fine. Do as you wish, Guardian Angels. But do not get in our way."
"Wait, soo... What's Radiant doing here anyway?" HornedBull asked.
"I'm the founder of the Paladins. How do you think I was able to get information so quickly?" Radiant replied.
So, the Paladins resumed their attacks on the Tenterlion MKII, with the aid of the Guardian Angels. With more attacks, things were looking bright, perhaps this battle doesn't seem that hard. But not long... Summons! Masses of Stoor Worms, Slug Gs, Kilimajaro and Yetis appeared. It over ran one quarter of the whole of Black Swamp. At least the summons looked normal. They didn't seem to be buffed up. The Guardian Angels splited up to destroy the monsters, while Liange remained to aid Veraca, since she didn't have any AoE(Area of Effect) skill.
Chio and HornedBull were a great combination, because they were able to use the same skills. Blazing Strike and Inferno Blade. With a big mob, Inferno Blade was able to destory more than 5 at once, together with Blazing Strike. Looking from a birds' eye view, the Kilimanjaro and Yeti mob disappeared quickly. Fire Sword were seen everywhere, continued with Tidal Slash to wipe out any stray fire and monster.
"Earthquake!"
Aurora and Bakaeep could also wipe out the Stoor Worms and Slug Gs pretty fast. With Cleaving Terra and Earthquake, monsters were unable to get close them. Finally, after a few minutes, the mob were defeated. Now, it's back to the Tenterlion. The Tenterlion stopped in it's track, and turned around. Retreating? Wrong. It challenged the Paladins and the Guardian Angels. It shot a bolt of thunder, which incinerated a large area of land, roughly as big as the Spicy Dragon MKII's fire attack! It's no pushover. Radiant came up to Veraca and the Guardian Angels. He passed them a wireless radio, for communication.
"Use it to make a formation and come up with a strategy against this beast. Stopping it is our first priority." Radiant told them. "I will study this Tenterlion, and see if it has any weak spot."
So, as they attacked randomly, from every direction, they were planning their strategy and formation. Finally they were in position.
"Alright. Do as we've planned. Go!" Veraca shouted.
"Roger!" the Guardian Angels replied, as all 6 of them charged at the Tenterlion together.
yeah part 4 :3 n ver;s in
as i said in game i will slowly draw the characters n make them nicer n human looking n show u guys of course chio will hav a preview since chio writes the story :3 n no its nt in comics form, i read them but i dun draw them. i shall jus let ppl reading hav an image of how the characters look like it may hav to wait through cos im having attachement x.x