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Devilaurora Posted: 08-31-2008 10:35 AM

So, this is going to be my first story writing in almost 1 year, so i might have deproved from the standard i had in school. Go ahead and make comments, but please be constructive. I don't want to see, " Oh my god, you suck" and the likes. It will put me off and not continue again. I want to improve myself in this aspect ^_^

For this story, I will use my own character names and the names of my friends

Note: This story defies gameplay experience. Further more, Part 2 will have things outside of the TO world. Sci-Fi. Currently, i'm working on Part 2 so, look forward to it =3

Also, i have a blog for my stories now. Here's the link: http://trickster-remixed.blogspot.com/

Enjoy ^_^

 

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Those who fight for justice:

Chio, 3rd job Duelist.                                                         (First Appearance in Chapter 1)
Aurora, 3rd job Soulmaster.                                                (First Appearance in Chapter 1)
Radiant. 3rd job Priest.                                                       (First Appearance in Chapter 2)
Liange. 3rd job Champion.                                                  (First Appearance in Chapter 3)
Bakaeep. 3rd job Soul Master.                                            (First Appearance in Chapter 3)
HornedBull. 3rd job Gladiator.                                              (First Appearance in Chapter 3)
Veraca. 3rd job Diva.                                                          (First Appearance in Chapter 4)
Tykro. 3rd job Scientist.                                                      (First Appearance in Chapter 5)
Tuvis. 3rd job Duelist.                                                         (First Appearance in Chapter 10)
Soul, 3rd job Thief Master.                                                  (First Appearance in Chapter 10)
Rwinna, 3rd job Thief master.                                              (First Appearance in Chapter 10)
Angii, 3rd job Witch.                                                          (First Appearance in Chapter 17)
 

Those who fight for evil:

Kitsune, 3rd job Thief Master.                                              (First Appearance in Chapter 1)
Kitasen, 3rd job Dark Lord.                                                  (First Appearance in Chapter 10)
Shimega, 3rd job Dark Lord.                                                (First Appearence in Chapter 17)
Levy, 3rd job Primadonna.                                                   (First Appearence in Chapter 23)
Pharrell, 3rd job Mercenary.                                                 (First Appearence in Chapter 25)
Tuvis, 3rd job Duelist.                                                          (First Appearence in Chapter 31

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Contents:

Part 1
Strange boss monsters start appearing around Caballa. However their looks were different, same goes for their strength and power. It would seem that someone is controlling them, changing them into something different. Two humans and a mysterious person, who isn't all human, were the culprits of all. Until a group of people, with their mind set on saving Caballa got together to put this madness to a halt. More allies appear, and to balance them out, more evil will start to cover Caballa in hopes of achieving their dream, World Domination.

Chapter 1 - First Encounter with Blood

Chapter 2 - The Boss Challenge

Chapter 3 - Spicy Treat

Chapter 4 - Saving Cabigal

Chapter 5 - Tenter Terror

Chapter 6 - Three ways to complete a task

Chapter 7 - Skull Carnage

Chapter 8 - Soki's Assault

Chapter 9 - Odinea's Reign

Chaper 10 - Allies and Enemies

Chapter 11 - To Find the Mastermind

Chapter 12 - Defending Evil

Chapter 13 - Karan's past

Chapter 14 - Separation

Chapter 15 - Face off against Karan

Chapter 16 - The other side of Karan

Chapter 17 - They returned!

Chapter 18 - A new beginning

Chapter 19 - Evil Schemes

Chapter 20 - Transformation?

Chapter 21 - Palace Panic

Chapter 22 - The new creation works

Chapter 23 - Reflections

Chapter 24 - To beat ourselves

Chapter 25 - Foiling yet another plan

Chapter 26 - Reaching Rosetta

Chapter 27 - Planetary's Impact

Chapter 28 - Universal Power

Chapter 29 - Summonings!

Chapter 30 - Putting up a hell of a fight

Chapter 31 - Betrayal?

Chapter 32 - Their painful past

Chapter 33 - Mad Ray attacks

Chapter 34 - Released from Agony

Chapter 35 - Lycan & Rosetta

Chapter 36 - Return of the Planets

Chapter 37 - Declaration of War

Chapter 38 - The war begins

Chapter 39 - Reminising the past

Chapter 40 - Reunion

Chapter 41 - The Black Dragon of Darkness

Chapter 42 - Lycan's Battle

Chapter 43 - The End

 

Part 2
Five years after the evil is cleansed. Caballa is back to it's peaceful state, where dispair was no longer part of everyone's daily lives. However, that's just what it looks like from the outside Caballa. Only when you venture in, will you realise what exactly has happen. Cities, like Megalopolis, was no longer what it use to be. Tall buildings, the noisy and heartwarming city, is now leveled. Tall buildings has been destroyed, only various sturdier buildings still stand. Behind this destruction stands a greater evil, far worse than those five years ago. Somehow, the citizens of Caballa have phased out those who have saved them five years ago. Corruption is everywhere. Chaos. Riots. But of course, there are always people who still believed in them. But they are now they minority. Where are they now?

Chapter 1 - Before Disaster

Chapter 2 - Swallowed

Chapter 3 - Beta

Chapter 4 - Third Victim

 

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[Chapter 1 - First encounter with Blood]

"Wahaha! Who are you that dares enter my lair?!" Count Blood's voice blasted through the castle.

"Oh no! What is this light beneath?" Chio shouted to Aurora, turning to her with a puzzled look.

"I believe Count is teleporting us away from him. He probably don't want trespasses on his lair! Let's get out of here while we still can!" Aurora replied.

"No way! We've came so far! I've just killed 25 Vampire bats and used up a lot of my elixir potions. It's too late to be turning back!"

Suddenly, Chio and Aurora found themselves before the Kerberos, Guradian of the 1st trials to Count Blood. "Haha, I see Count has woken up again. So... Still want to enter his lair?" said the Kerberos, with an evil glint in it's eyes.

"Of course, " said Chio. "He will cower in fear when he sees me!"

Hiding behind Chio's back, Aurora said, "Lets not get too overconfident, Chio. I don't know if i can even harm him."

"Relax! Your job is just to kill his minions, which i believe to have Niwerth, which is weak against your magic. We'll be fine! Now let us in, Keberos! Follow closely, Aurora, alright?"

As Chio and Aurora dashed through the Guardian Keberos infested room, damage upon them were inflicted frequently. Aurora was incharged of keeping both of them healthly, to face the further challenges ahead. As they reached the 2nd Trials, the Maid Lydia, Guardian of the 2nd trials started laughing. "Welcome back. Are you giving up soon?"

"Shut up and watch me in action!" Chio rebutted, and ran towards the iron grills, where she saw a lot of Vampire Bats nearby. "Hurry, Aurora! Use your magic and kill those on the right side. You will easily get the last 15 needed. I will handle those on the left with my Piercing Wave."

Few minutes later, both Chio and Aurora completed the monster quest. Before continuing on, both of them had to recover their mana first. They were comparing some skills and strenght when Maid Lydia interrupted them.

"Haha. Time is almost up. Do you still want to continue on?" she shouted to them. "I smell another human coming. Probably right where Kerberos is."

"Of-of course we are going!" Chio said, shocked that someone was right behind them. "Hurry, Aurora, before the other person catches up."

"Oh-oh okay"

When they reached the next room, the noticed Mister Freaks, Guardian of the 3rd trials, pacing to and fro, stratching his head, looking really bored and irritated. Suddenly, out of nowhere, he screamed out. "Why isn't anyone coming?! I have been waiting for ages! Why was I appointed to be Guardian of this boring--" He stopped short when he saw Chio and Aurora giving him a really really weird look. Feeling embraressed, Mister Freaks started looking away, and not keeping in eye contact. Then he continued. "Here for the wisdom trials, are you? Well well, if you are, you won't pass it easily! I have spent that last 5 minutes getting a really tough one for each of you."

Chio replied in disbelief. "Waiting 5 minutes equals to waiting for ages...? What's wrong with you...?"

Mister Freaks replied angrily. "Fine! Insult me! I just won't give the test to you OR your friend. I will just give it to the person reaching here soon."

"Ah-ah-. I'm Sorry! I didn't mean it that way!" Chio answered frantically, with Aurora giggling away at the back.

"Isn't this a Sudoku puzzle?" Aurora asked. "It's simple. Pass them to me."

"Here," said Aurora, after a few seconds of scribbling. "The answers for the puzzle."

"... ..." Both Chio and Mister Freaks were speechless. "How... Did you solved them so quicly...?" said Chio and Mister Freaks in unison.

"It's a secret," replied Aurora, winking. "So, did we pass?"

"Just go..." said Mister Freaks, in a sad tone. "The next person will get the toughest puzzle ever!"

A howl was heard from the next room, followed by a groan, a human groan. And yes, it was Lycan in the middle of the room. With.... Maid Lydia and Mister Freaks at each side of the room?!

Lycan said, " This is a trial of luck. Either you make it to Blood or you go back out. Your choice. Talk to either Mister Freaks or Maid Lydis when you are ready..."

"But... Lydia... Freaks... Lydia... Freaks...! Weren't they just outside..?" Chio said, still stuck in that moment of shock.

"Them?" Lycan asked, then answered. "Twins.Heard that word before? T-W-I-N-S. Need more explanation...?"

Chio shook her head and turned to Aurora and ask,"Which path should we take? The right or the left? I'll let you choose, but don't screw up!"

After thinking for a moment, Aurora shouted, "Right! The Right is right."

"... ..." went Chio. "Were you even choosing..?"

Aurora stuck out her tongue and pull Chio towards Maid Lydia." We choose this path!"

In the path, there were a lot of... Guardian Kerberos again! They dashed as fast as they could and ran through the door on the other side. When the entered, they saw... Count Blood! But wait... As they looked around, bodies of past adventurers and travellers lay motionless all over the room.

Undetered, Chio charged up her skills. Pumping Heart, Bullseye, Eagle Eyes, Hyper Beat and Guard. As for Aurora, She charged up her Aura of Mana, Bolster Ballad and Mist of Mana. After that was done, Chio charged right at Blood. Blood laughed at their foolishness

Thinking to herself, Chio went, "First, Tetra Punch. Then Uppercut, then Quad Punch, then repeat."

As Chio attacks, and recharging Guard after every few hits, Aurora supports from the back, with Cure, and when no cure was needed, Cleaving Terra and Earthquake were used to wipe out Blood's summons and to deal damage to Blood himself. Just when Blood was about to fall, a giant marble flew in, hitting Blood hard, giving the final blow. Chio and Aurora then turned to the doorway in dismay. An Explorer walked, tossing a Gong Marble up in the air and catching it back, gave them a proud look.

Aurora suddenly shouted to Chio, "Look! a Blood Sword!, Take it, hurry!"

As Chio was about to dash for the sword, the Explorer took something out of her pocket and threw it in  Chio's and Aurora's direction.

"It's a mine! Explosive Expert! Aurora, duck!" Chio shouted.

When the mine exploded, the whole room was engulf with smoke and dirt. Chio and Aurora couldn't see what was going on anymore. Kitsune took this chance and went to the front, picking up the Blood Sword, and laughing at both Chio and Aurora. For a quick escape, Kitsune took out a port from her pocket. Just as she was about to use it, she said, "My name is ShinigamiKitsune. You can call me Kitsune for short. Remember it well. Oh, and thanks for the seal and sword!" Then she teleported away.

"Grr... That darn Explorer... My Blood Sword! I'll get you!" screamed Chio.

"Calm down, Chio,"Aurora said, as she passed Chio a port to Paradise. "We'll hunt it again tomorrow."

Right when they arrived in Paradise, the first thing they saw was Kitsune showing off her newly aquired Blood Sword to the public.

(To be continued... Hopefully)

Oh well, that's the end of this story now. Whew, took quite a while to typed it down XD

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L0Lzzzz replied on 09-01-2008 5:00 AM
Good story Chio *claps* XD

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Devilaurora replied on 09-01-2008 5:35 AM

Ahahaha, thank you xD

I will try to continue it if idea come.

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L0Lzzzz replied on 09-01-2008 6:19 AM
Are you gonna add ver and the rest of us in the story? :O

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Devilaurora replied on 09-01-2008 7:38 AM

Well, as you know from my sig, Chio, Aurora and Kitsune is my charctaers. Radiant was my deleted light dragon a few months back. But i didn't use other players name because i am scared if i gave them a bad position i might get flame =p

 Unless i am to start a new story, with other players having different parts, then that's different. Like villans and the heros, being characters that pops out every once in a while. Then i can atke the first story as a testing, then i will make a whole new one, and try to make it as colourful as possible xD

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Devilaurora replied on 09-03-2008 4:18 AM

[Chapter 2 - The Boss Challenge]

"Kitsune!" Chio screamed, as she raced towards her, with her fist up in the air.  Just as Chio was about to land a hit on Kitsune, someone shouted out.

"Hinder Snare!"

Both Kitsune and Chio found themselves immobilize. They turned to their right, and saw a Priest walking out of the Monster Guild.

"Fights like this shouldn't be carried out here. Go to the battlefield if you want to fight. My name is Radiant, and if you continue to disturb the peace in this town, I will not hesitate to take down both of you," he said, as he cancelled the effect of Hinder Snare.

"I see you are still sore about losing your Blood Sword to me, Bunny," Kitsune said proudly. "Oh, I don't believe know your name."

"Pointless," shouted Chio. "I will take you down!"

"Oh really? Well, prove it! Lets see who can bring down the most boss monsters in 1 month. The one who brings back the most seals wins. We'll let Radiant be the judge. If you win, fine, I'll return this sword. But, if you lose... Well, let's leave the details for later. Hahaha!"

"What...? Don't I get a say in this...?" Radiant asked.

"Wait! In that amount of time, i could huant another Blood-"

Before Chio could finish her sentence, Kitsune teleported away, with the Blood Sword.

"Darn it!" Chio screamed. "She's going to pay for this!"

"Don't worry, Chio," Aurora said. "I'll help you get the seals too. This way, we can get more seals in that 1 month and win her."

"Hang on. You are... Chio, is that right?" Radiant asked.

"Yeah, and that's Aurora."

"I see. Let me offer my services as well. I don't like that fox's attitude. Let's win this contest together."

"Really?! Alright! I'll go and fighter Tenterlion, while Aurora kills Captain Skull and Radiant, you kill Soki. How about that?"

"Roger that, Chio!" said Aurora and Radiant in unison.

After that, they all split ways, and arranged to meet back once every week.

Week 1. Chio had gathered 20 Tenterlion seals, and felt very proud of herself. But, Aurora and Radiant got 35 of the seals they were assigned to. Of course, Chio didn't feel too happy about it, but what matters is the contest and the total number of seals.

Week 2. The total number of seals doubled. They are now at 180 seals.

Week 3. 270 seals. The toll of fighting bosses are starting to show. Injuries like scratches and bruises were seen. Fatigue started to show. But there's only 1 week left. No giving up now.

Week 4. All 3 of them were drained. 400 seals in total were collected. Chio had pushed herself pass her limit just to get more. Though they had gotten stronger through the ordeal, fighting bosses obviously takes a lot of of them.

Judgement day. The 3 of them went to the O/X booth at Paradise to wait for Kitsune. 3 hours had past, but there wasn't a sign of her. They continued to wait. 4 hours. 5. 6. 7. 8 hours. Finally, at midnight, they noticed Kitsune.

"Look there she is!" Chio exclaimed.

"No... Wait..." Aurora said. "Kitsune is a Explorer, that's a Thief Master. Shouldn't be her."

"Don't be too sure, Aurora." said Radiant. "1 month is plenty to reach their Third Job Advancement and pass it. But this may mean she has lesser seals due to her training."

Suddenly the Theif Master infront of them disappeared. But out of nowhere, a voice was heard. "He's right, you know? 1 months is plenty to get to third job."

Chio fell to the floor in shocked. "What the...?!"

"Not to worry. It's the Thief Master's skill, Hide," Radiant said. "Show yourself!"

"Haha. So I see you really did get the seals. So how many do you have? I should warn you, I have a lot of them."

"We have 400 seals! 100 Tenterlion seals, 130 Skull seals and 170 Soki seals, " Aurora said. "Beat that! We're getting the Blood Sword back."

"400 seals. Not bad. You did better than i had expected. Now, let's see the winner. I have..."

 

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tly replied on 09-03-2008 5:55 AM

aww eep's not in it? D:

anyway nice interesting story *hates cliffhanger* *bites* add eep in or cat either of them XD :3

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Maybe when ideas come, i will add mpre people in xD

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o.o' Add me in it too?

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Sure, after ideas come

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