[Fan Fiction] Grand Chase: Sister's Jealousy

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Zhon Posted: 05-24-2009 8:28 PM

Hosting Suyasi's fan-char related fanfic for her :)

Feel free to comment.  She loves reading feedback!

 

 


 

 

This fanfic is strongly based on a fan-character I have developed by the name of May.
http://forum.ntreev.net/grandchase/forums/p/40983/484042.aspx#484042
There's her bio.

 

This fanfic will of course have some gruesome violence, but it mostly will be a comedy as if May actually joined the Grand Chase.

 

Chapters:
1. Encounter
2. ???
3.
Etc

Chapter 1: Encounter

           
            It was a harsh day, waves of fire traveled pass me as one of the civilians of the Maw came up to me, "We have intruders!" it cried in panic. As I made myself stand up, I reached for my whip which was setting on the ground. "Intruders huh? They're not reaching Starklin without a fight.." I said with an annoyed tone. In all honestly I hated my job, if it weren't for that little pink princess I wouldn't even be here! Oh how I wish she'd just show up so I could kill her, get back at her for ruining my life ever since that little brat was born! Then I couldn't believe my eyes, just then I saw a party of eight approaching me; I could not make out their shapes yet, if they were human or followers of the Ascendant God.

            I clenched my fists, feeling my nails dig into my skin tearing open cuts and making my hand bleed. I saw a pink haired girl conversing with a blonde elven girl, I instantly felt immense rage as they stopped once they spotted me standing on this boulder.
            "Move or we'll have no choice but to defeat you!" The red haired girl cried as she drew her sword, and entered an unfamiliar to me fighting stance.
            "Kindly move out of the way so we can reach Starklin or we will have to silence you.." The short silver haired... boy said in a harsh tone.

            "Starklin? You're the intruders..!" Oh this was perfect! Amy was there, I'll kill her.. I'll make her pay for what she did to me! I pointed toward the pink haired girl, obviously able to pick her out easily by her stupid pigtails. "Amy, I don't know what happened.. but I don't mind, it just means I get to kill you!" I watched as the whole team entered stances except one of them, yes... he had red spiked hair and was... drooling? I stood there and blinked at the odd boy who was just standing there, drooling... was he retarded?!

            "You're so pretty....." he said unintelligently.
            "Oh god, not again..." The silver haired boy said while putting his palm to his face.
            "Ha.. ha.." A girl with short purple hair started to laugh while dropping her wand.
            "Jin! Focus!" The red hair girl said while shooting me a rather nasty look.
            Then finally, Amy stepped up and looked me straight in the eye, "Back off May.. We need through."

            Oh the nerve of her! Telling me to back off!? I screamed in rage and immediately lunged myself off the boulder straight for Amy, "I'LL KILL YOU, YOU LITTLE SPOILED BRAT!" I roared as I charged at Amy!

            "Amy! Move, she's heading straight for you!" The orange haired boy shouted in caution.
            "Hah! We get to see little miss pumpkin face in action now!" The blonde elven girl said.

            Amy cartwheeled out of my reach by the time I reached her, she had already drawn her chakrani and ran straight for me! I leaped into the air and lashed my whip at her, trying to get ahold of her weapon; I missed! "I'll get back at you for what you caused me to suffer!" I yelled as I stepped a foot forward, pulled back my whip and lashed it at her catching her off guard and knocking her to the ground! "Gotcha.." I said confidently.

            "Amy!" The rest of the team shouted except the drooling boy.

            "I'm disappointed it was this easy to beat you, brat." I said as I approached the fallen dancer. However, just as I was about to reach her and finish her off, she raised off the ground with her head lowered. I watched as the bands holding her pigtails up ripped off and part of her hair was cut clean off.

            "..You..." She hissed at me, as I saw her face. Her eyes were bright red and burning with rage, This was new to me. She immediately got up in my face, kneed me in the stomach and then slammed my face into the ground. She lifted my bloody face and held it to her's, "You. NEVER. MESS UP MY HAIR!" she screamed at my face and then punched me right in the nose! What the hell was going on! I got out of her grip and backed up struggling to move. Then she charged at me screaming "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!" My eyes widened and I forgot all about my pain and I ran the other way as fast as I could, I've never seen her like this! Help!

 

 

 

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Kewl!! Suyasi's made a fanfic!

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