~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Cast~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Elesis:A short tempered-sword wielding warrior. Lire:A noble elven archer.
Arme:A mage who Elesis under-estimates. Ronan:A warrior from Kanavan.
Lass:A theif who was controlled by Kaze'aze. Ryan:A silent caracter in this story.
Amy:A dancer from Xenia. Jin:A fighter of the Silver Knights.
Ana:A girl who's soul was trapped inside of a gem found on Kaze'aze.
Chaos:A demonic heart shaped monster. Chao: Chaos incognito.
Ana X:A clone of Ana, but evil.
Lovely: A heart shaped demon with a sword/bow/staff/axe.
Love:Heart shaped civilian of Heartopilas. Marie:Mother of Ana, who died in a fire
Daniel:Father of Ana, who died in a fire. Poni:A group of furry creatures
Lexi:A mental warrior, who helps protect the high lands of Ellia from Kaze'aze.
Mr.Kiroshi: Owner of the orphanage. Chaoniton: The demonic lord of upper-hell.
Epilogue
As Elesis,Lire,Arme, and Ronan destroyed Kaze'aze, a glowing red gem dropped. Arme picked it up.
Arme: Hey guys, look at this. I think it's an advanced power core! ~Elesis snatches it from Armes hands.~
Elesis: Looks regular to me. ~Arme tries to grab it back, but it falls on the floor and smashes.~
From the broken gem, a red gas came out. It started to form a heart, but with sharp sides. After that, it looked like a coffin. It opened up.
Chaos: I'm free. ~He gets out of the box and reveals two giant white-gloved hands, one holding a staff with a sparkling diamond on it.~ Now, I shall regain the temple in my own rightful name! ~Giant vortex starts forming, and he jumps in it, and the Grand Chase get's sucked in, along with Lass.~
Love:Welcome to the city of ~Chaos smacks him with his staff.~
Chaos:Out of the way, you brain-washed pig! ~Turns to Grand Chase and Lass~ Come my minions, let us take our place in this kingdom. ~Vortex opens up in the sky and a blonde haired girl falls through~
Ronan: Is it my birth day already? ~Smirks~
Jin: Keep it shut Ronan. ~Lightly smacks Ronans arm-
Lass: Who the hell is she? ~Looks at Lire~
Lire: I don't know who she is. ~Turns to Arme~
Arme: Me either. ~Turns to Elesis~ Maybe Elesi---
Elesis: Shut it Arme. ~Turns to blonde haired girl~
Ana: Ow. ~Rubs head~
Chaos: Get your fat but off of me! Im royalty! Do you hear me!
Ana: Well ~Eyes turn dark green and get slanted~ I can always change that.
Chaos: Ana, why so much hostilaty towards me! What did I do.
Ana: What you did was trap me with you in a cube! Now that I'm free Im going to kick you so hard on your----
Arme/Lire/Elesis: Who are you!?!?
Ana: My name is Ana Von'Dual. I am the, I mean 'was' the assistant of this demon. Until I found out he wanted to put everyone in a living hell. There's a reason I can do ~Fingers turn into sharp claws, eyes turn green.~ this.
Chaos: Stop annoying me with your parlor tricks! ~Tries to smack Ana with staff~ Follow orders, vile woman! And all you did was steal my powers. Cheapo!
Ana: I am not your assistant, ~Claws at Chaos but misses~ you demonic little ~Get's smacked by staff~
Ana and Chaos start fighting, and after twenty minutes . . .
Ronan: I'm getting bored. Kanavan Strike! ~Stops fight and send Chaos into the air, missing Ana on purpose. Turns to Ana~ So, you got pla--- ~Amy skips into the scene, sneakily.~
Amy: Well, I guess Samsara better know about this. ~Skips off~
Ryan: Wow!
Elesis: First time he has said anything in days!
Ana: That chick is a spy! ~Teleports infront of Amy and smacks her with her elbow.
Amy than pulls Ana's hair, and Ana, hits Amy, while Amy knee's Ana in the stomach. Ronan get's out his wallet.
Ronan: Anyone wanna take a crazy portal back to Kaze'azes castle. This is getting very annoying. ~Ana than rips part of Amy's shirt off~ Nevermind, RIP HER HEAD OFF!!! ~Amy unleashes a combo of punches, than claws at Ana's face.~
Elesis: Crazy Portal, we should have more cash poi- ~hides box of bon-bons~ Nevermind.
Ana: You daughter of a,how about you DIE! ~Becomes true demon. Horns sprout out of head, fingers become sharp blades, eyes glow red, and send out a light green gas. And voice has a dark echo~ Death Beam! ~Shoots out a green lazer from eyes, and Jin shields Amy with Ronans shield.
Jin: Stop killing each other. Now, can we just talk this out, before I have to break someones legs?
Chaos: I have work to do. ~Summons cage and drops it on them~ If you starve, try to eat each other. Tootle-Doo! ~Levitates off-
Amy: Ow. ~Tear runs down face, and blood drips off cheek.~
Jin: Well, better get comfortable. We will be here for a while. ~Sits next to Amy.~
Ronan: I guess so. ~Sits next to Ana~ So Ana~Gives small smirk~, you got plans later on?
Ana: Other than being outside of a cage, nope. ~Teleports outside, and and uses lazer to cut open cage.~ Well, come on, we have to stop him. ~Starts running down a bath to a huge tower with a heart on it. Ronan follows, then everyone else does~
Amy: Jin, ~leans head on his shoulder~ thanks for saving me out their. ~Jin blushes~ Hehe!
Ronan: So, what are you doing after this?
Ana: Will you go hit o--- ~Ronan pushes her and the rest into a giant bush~
Ronan: Careful, this place is highly guarded!
Ana: Highly guarded? ~stamps foot on ground and spike destroys the guards~ Let's go.
Chapter One:Nine Little Warriors Going To Fight, One Gets Bites, And Then There Were Eight.
They opened the door and went in the corridor. It was empty and dark. There were nine doors, and everyone chose a door. Here's Ryan's story.
Ryan opened the door and walked inside. The floor was wet, and there was a slithering sound. Then, out of nowhere, a giant monster jumped out and ate Ryan, since Serpento did not have any lines for him. Don't worry, he'll be back in three to four hours. He died since he doesnt have many lines.
Chapter Two: Eight Little Warriors Staying Up High, One Stayed Up To High, And Then There Were Seven.
Amy clutched her purse in her hands. She saw stairs. A lot of stairs. Instead of going up them, she ran and jumped, and ran and jumped, and got higher and higher and higher, and than she ran out of breath. When she breathed in, she went down. Don't worry, she always lives for no reason.
Chapter Thre----
Dame Agatha Christie: This is not "And Then There Were None" so give it a rest! ~exits~
Amy:Thanks! That was painful. Ow, i broke 1/120 of a nail! Someone call the police!
Ryan:Stop crying.
Ana: Let's use the elevator.
Elesis: Ronan, how come your hitting on the new girl? It's not like you.
Ronan: ~Turns to face Elesis~ Why would you car- wait. Are you jealous?
Elesis: What! Of course not! ~Turns red with anger~
Ana: Ronan ~Smacks Ronan, and his face shatters off, revealing a similiar look to Ana, but darker~
Ana X: Well, Chaos was right. Fooling you and stopping this charade will be harder than I thought. ~Pulls out two long dark swords~ BLEHEHEHE!
Ana: Bring it on! ~Ana starts unleashing her rage~
X slashed Ana on her arm, while Ana ignored the bloody mess dripping, and unleashed a series of punches, kicks, and (Using a knife) slashed X in half. Then X re attached itself together.
Ana X: We will meet again! ~X disapears~
Lire: Where is the real Ronan than?
~~Meanwhile outisde Kaze'aze's Castle~~
Poni: Well, he's got blue hair, some seal from kanavan, and a coupon at De'soir hair salon. ~Blue Poni takes coupon~
Ronan: Ugh ~Get's up~ what happened?
Poni: ~Hides behind a tree and uses a ghostly voice~ All hell has broken loose and you are the only one who can save us!
Ronan: Who is this?
Poni: ~Wispers to other Poni:Let's just talk to him.~ Okay, so no hell broke loose. Except the evil Chaos has been freed from a gem that Kaze'aze had. We told her to keep it from breaking, or a force even worse than her would be unleashed. By the way, she's alive,somehow, if you wanna serve her.
Ronan:Where is the Grand Chase team?
Poni: They got sucked in a portal, than some blonde haired girl jumped in right before it closed. If you want, Kaze'aze can get you there so you can stop this madness for her. She won't do it until you get her something first. Poni, stop copying my words! No you! Not you! Yes you! ~The Poni start fighting~
Ronan: Well, ~Heads for the stairs of Kaze'aze castle~ bye. Wow, so many stairs. If only I could teleport out of here. ~Sighs~
~~Meanwhile back at Heartopilas~~
Ana: Doesn't matter now. He's not here. Now, let's use this elevator.
????: ~Loud female voice~ I wouldn't do that if I were you. ~A woman wrapped in cloth slowly comes down~ My name is Lexi Farnell, Chaos has instructed me to misguide you, OR to just kill you. Hehe!
Elesis: Well, thanks for the idea. ~Thinks:Moron~
Lexi:So, we go to name calling, typical for you Elesis. At least I can unleash some wrath to you, but for now I have other plans. ~Puts two fingers to head~ Now, ~Eyes glow red~ pyschic shot! ~Unleashes red laser~
Ana: Watch out Lire! ~Pushes her out of the way~
Lexi: Well, well, well! How about you Arme? ~Unleashes a giant ball of electric energy~
Ana: Arme! ~Pushes her out of the way, and reflects the ball~
Lexi: Ag-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g! ~Lexi screams, but it is not her voice~
Chaos: Even when possesed you don't do the job. Come X! ~X's dark energy floats out of Lexi and it flies through the ceiling~
Lexi: ~Eyes turn red~ Where am I? Who are you?
Amy: We're the Grand Chase team. You must be Lexi. ~Thinks:So much for wierdo dark mage remake~
Lexi: Dark mage remake? Well, guess what honey, I can kick more but than you, so keep it shut! And be careful what you think!
Lire: Oh no she didn't! ~Thinks:Looks like Lexi is gonna rip Amy a part. So much for that spy~
Ana: Wait, ~takes off Lexi's covering~ you! ~Embraces~
Lexi: Ana? Is it you, from the orphanage?
Ana: Yup, so, how are your pyschic skills going?
Arme: Pyschic?
Elesis: Orphanage?
Lexi: Yes, I have pyschic abilities, and me and Ana met at the orphanage, around eight years ago I think. Horrible what had happened to Ana.
Elesis/Arme/Lire: What happened?
Ana: Well. . . . . . .
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter Two~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Vile Past
Marie: It's such a nice night. Ana's asleep, the town is silent.
Daniel: Very calm. ~Bottle breaks through a window~ What the---- ~The bottle explodes creating a hole in the wall, and sending Daniel and Marie to the other side of the living room~
Marie: Daniel, let's get Ana, ~She runs up the stairs, while the fire travels up the banister~
A bottle flew into Ana's room, nocking her crib at a window, and Ana onto garbage bags. Marie, who was in the room, was slammed into a wall, and thrown off the stairs. Daniel, running around panicking, had part of the roof collapse on him. They were dead. Ana was 'presumed' to be dead, also.
Later, Mr. Kiroshi walked around the street. He heard crying in the distance. He walked over, and saw that in a group of trash bags, was Ana. She was covered in ash. He picked up the baby, and saw that it was Ana. He knew this, because the baby was near a skinny piece of wood (Possibly from her crip) that said Ana, in big pink blod letters.
Mr.Kiroshi took Ana to his orphanage, fed her, cleaned her, and she lived there until the age of fourteen, and than. . . .
Marcie:Hehehe, put the fake gem under Ana's pillow. They'll think it's real, while we cash this in the next town over. Hehe!
Later that day, in the forest. . . .
Officer: Stop running, or we'll shoot! Five,four,three,two, FIRE! ~Arrows fly out, one striking Ana's shoulder~
Ana manged to run out of their sight, and into a cave.
????: I've been waiting, Von'dual!
Ana: Huh. . .~Turnes around and she get's stuffed in a bag~ Hey ~Muffled~ let me out of here! Who are you! ~Struggles~
Chaos: It's me, Chaos. Your family has stolen some things and IM here to collect them, but I've already collected everything, except one thing. And you know about it.
Ana: I don't know anything about what your talking about!
Chaos: Yes you do. You know where the soul gem is, and I want it back. Wait, ~Rips necklace off of Ana~ perfect!
Later, Chaos has Ana in a giant tube in his lab.
Chaos: ~Singing in a 'happy' tone~ Well, well, well, what do we have here? A shiny gem, oh, Im really fascinated, so your the one running with it on! ~Stops singing~ I'll just make some things for you good, in that tube. ~Presses a button and pulls a level~ Bye-bye, and hello X!
Ana: ~Electricity starts to shock her in the tube~ Ahhhhhhhh! ~Continues to scream in agony~
Ana X: ~Darker version of Ana~ Where, am I?
Chaos: Your safe, ~Opens Ana X's tube~ your name is Ana X, and I am your guardian.
Ana X: I will do anything to serve my lord.
Chaos: Let's rupture up Chaoniton. The demon should be awoken. ~Orders several Lovelys to take Ana to the guest room~
After Chaos and X got to the temple, Chaos took out his staff.
Chaos: ~Eyes glow red. Swings staff in air~ Awaken, oh purest heart, for thine love is needed, and thou needs thine to assist in horror, awaken now, or fear a capture. By the dreaded gods of Azul, it is done! ~Sky turns red. Rain turns to blood. Ground shakes~
Ana X: Chaos, what's happening? ~Ceiling falls down. A giant meteor smashes down~
Chaoniton: ~Loud, echoing, evil voice~ You have summoned me, to this day, to rain the forty days of Hell! You have raised me, from the death of long ago. I claim you as my master. What is your bidding?
Chaos: To bring a family together. ~Get's out soul gem~ How about it, ~Cracks gem open with staff~ you won't betray me! ~Dark shadows fly out of gem and latch on to Chaoniton~
Ana X: Perfect plan, raise him, than control him.
Chaos: He is not to be trusted. Only as a pet, he may be. Come Chaoniton, and Ana. let's go home, and make the plans.
The huge castle doors had been dismantled. Chaos is shocked.
Ana: Get your gloves off of me! ~Shoot a laser at a Lovely. Grabs a Lovely, rips it in half with claws, and throws it at another~
Chaos: Chaoniton, make the girl rest!
Chaoniton becomes it's true form. It looks like Kaze'aze, but it is covered in dried blood, it's claws are sharper, it's horns are sturdier, and it's body is like a rock.
Ana: ~Spotlights show on Ana and Chaoniton. "Oogie Boogie's Song" background music comes on~ Well, well, well, what a pest you are? ~Chaoniton tries to stab Ana with horns~ Still trying to kill me, oh, can't say I like it!
Chaoniton: So your the one who's destroying things around here?~Ana shoots a laser at Chaoniton, but misses~ Your joking, your joking, I can't beleive my ears! A school girl trying to kill me, Im drowning in my tears!
Ana: ~Music changes to "Paint it Black"~ You think you'll win this fight, ~Dodges a giant claw~ but you are terribly wrong. I think you should go to Hell! ~Slashes Chaoniton's arm~
Chaoniton: ~Smashes boom box. Music stops~ No more fun and games.
Ana: Your right. ~Body changes into a demonic, sharp, and evil creature. Voice becomes dark~ Bring it on, girly!
Chaoniton: ~Stands on hind-legs~ I'll show you Hell! ~Spikes shoot out of chest~
Ana: You think you can kill me? ~Spikes bounce off demonic Ana~
Chaoniton: Chaos, I quit. ~Puts on hat, and grabs suitcase~ I'm going back to Hell. Bye!
Chaos: Darn!
Ana X: What does this gem do?
Chaos: You fool!
good story nice with the and then there were none thing
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Thanks for noticing that, I love Agatha Christie's books.
haven't read and then there were none but my sister read me the 8 little indian boys part
I will be updating this story every week or so. So if no new content on one day, maybe the next.
not bad nice flash back chapter poor ana lost her parents because of a greater evil I'd hate that
Yeh, her parents got killed :/ But it's all for caracter build up.
oh wow, really nice
Solid
Erm, this seems alot like the show Anushka:Demon Deminocin, but mixed with GC. Oh well, keep it fresh.
Love is a lie. A bold hearted grey lie, built on what we like. Affection, looks, money, help, it's all the same thing. What we want. Try not to be corrupted by these lies, because if you do, you will suffer.