Name: ElayneAge:17Likes:Sword Practice,Protecting FriendsDislikes:Lazy People,Losing Loved onesProfile:Long Dark Brown Hair,Brown Eyes,Wears Heavy Armor1st class:DefenderFirst Class Weapon:Broadsword
Element:Wind
Attack:Low-medium
Defense:High
Vitality:medium
Background:Came from a far away land looking for new ways of fighting. After studying and practicing how to fight, she left to look for decent adversaries to help train her on what she has already learned. Attacked by Skeleton knights, she defends herself from hundreds that came from nowhere. As she fights she realizes that there are too many to deal with. After losing all hope of succeeding, She begun seeing the skeleton knights change their attention to something else as she began to lose consciousness. Upon waking up, she saw the the midnight sky and a small fire. As she looked around she heard a voice, "Your finally up!,are you feeling better?". As she got up and looked around she saw three females and three males. She told them her name and where she came from, then asked them why they were here. Upon listening to their story she asked to join them on their quest to stop the evil appearing there.
Personality: Calm and collected at most times, Elayne Takes the most front position on the battle field. She believes in protecting her allies with her life is the most honorable way to die. She doesn't give in when it gets bad until she is dead she will fight.Fighting Pose:Elayne holds sword with both hands out in front, and sword almost touching the ground.Moveset:Basic attack: ZZ; Spins and slashes horizontally then slashes upwards sending the enemy into the air.Dash attack: >>ZZ; Dashes and stabs enemy with sword then does a horizontal slash.Jump attack: ^ZZ; Slashes vertically upwards then downwards.Block: << takes a step back into a defensive position for a few seconds.Grab: Grabs the opponent, throw the opponent into ground and impales the opponent.Skills (Regular and Cash)1st Grade Skill (Human Shield) The affected person no longer takes damage, instead Elayne takes any and all damage done to the person for 30 seconds.2nd Grade skill (tornado spin) Does rapid attacks while spinning across the visible screen dealing multiply hits on the enemies, dealing between 3-14 hits depending on how close the enemy is.3rd Grade skill (Earthquake) Jumps as high as her legs can take her and slams sword into the ground, which makes a shockwave damaging all enemies on the visible screen.1st Grade Cash Skill (Hurricane Stab): Quickly slashes enemy into air and the does three fairly damaging attacks in mid-air.Taunts/Voices/PosesStart of the stage: Elayne takes the sword off her shoulder and get into fighting position."Lets see if my training is sufficient for you"End of the stage: Elayne slashes the sword around three times."You weren't even worth my time""I should have come sooner if I had known you were this weak"Taunt: Elayne places sword on her shoulder"Ha, this is too easy""is that the best you can do?"Counter: Elayne falls onto her knee with sword going into the ground"I....can't...give up""I...have shamed you.....master"GP Mission"A army of skeleton knights are forming at the Kastulle Ruins, go and destroy them before they attack the nearby towns."3 Cyclops eyes(obtainable from *** Kastulle Ruins Lower Floor)5 Giant rocks(Obtainable from *** Kastulle Ruins Upper Floor)30 Skeleton Knight helms(obtainable from any * on Kastulle Ruins Lower Floor)30 Skeleton Bones(obtainable from *** on Kastulle Ruins Upper Floor)Cash Mission"There is a mysterious person at the Kastulle Ruins that is defeating skeleton knights, go and meet this person and find his purpose for being there."1 Giant Rock(Obtainable from *** Kastulle Ruins Upper Floor)5 Skeleton Knight helms(obtainable from any * on Kastulle Ruins Lower Floor)5 Skeleton Bones(obtainable from *** on Kastulle Ruins Upper Floor)
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Tell me what you think and if I need to add or change anything. If there is anyone that has a simular character I appolagize for I didn't look at all the fan characters. Just a reminder this IS my first Fan made character so It most likely won't be perfect.
Shes a bit Ok i guess.
-Defenders should have a Shield, rather than just a sword. Broad Swords are a bad weapon of choice for Defense (duh).-She should have a Guarding ability rather than just blocking, similar to AKs-1st Skill is OPed, because whoever is defended cant be hit. Even for the Character to take the hit, thats sacrifical. You might wanna change the time limit.-3rd Skill can easily be dodged by jumping.
Also if you get the time, make a picture of the character
Well she Wears Heavy Armor to defend herself and others, and she dosen't have a shield....just a two-handed sword. I don't want to copy other characters much at all, all I wanted was a blocking stance. Should the 1st skill be 10-15 seconds? Well should I make the 3rd skill overpowered? Right now it can be dodged like all skills at an extent. I'll try to make a picture, but I am not the best artist. Also, what do you think of the story? I kinda want every thing that could be better and try to change it.
Ah heavy armor...
Wait, since when did Broad Swords become 2 handed? They were always a type of Short Swords but with a slit in the middle.
Anyways i think the first skill like 7 seconds but who does it affect? That confuses me a bit.
3rd Should be a bit more effective. Like for example, Arme's Meteor has an extenct range but cant be dodged by a jump =P
Make a picture when you want, or you can ask someone else to do it for you.
As for the story, its Fine but you might want to add a Dialogue.
A over-sized Broadsword? :P Well the 1st skill could protect the entire party but my original ideal was it protected the nearest person for said time. I think the 3rd skill should work much like a jump attack but more damaging. I don't know anyone that can draw it for me and doubt my character intersets any artists but I will find out. A dialogue...I will think of it but It will take some time. I made this character up in my head before but never took the time to write it down. If I am good at this I should do it more often :D
Well then, good luck