Well-I saw saw people writing here so I decided to join.
Perty much I am gona go through story as it appears in game modifying certain aspects and adding some that don't apear in game.
I would wana dramatic and funny too.
Everything is limited- limited strength, limited ammunition.
Tell me what you think.
Chapter 1-The last task
In the throne room of Serdin castle Elesis and the Knightmaster where having a training dual contest.
Elesis swinging her sword blindly in every direction and breathing hard from all the effort while Knightmaster was dodging all her moves with great ease.
"Enough",the Knightmaster and with one swist blow knoks Elesis' sword out of her hands.
"You are still a hot head with the brain of an insect.You are not worthy to be on the team.
Get out.",Knightmaster adds.
Elesis bursts into tears and cries like little litle girl as she leaves the trown room.
"You know, I think she deserves a second chance.She is the only one that agreed to continue the trining after the first leson", the queen says.
"Fine,the Knightmaster says.
Some time later in a forest north of Serdin, Elesis is walking along a small footpath thinking.
"This time I'll show that arrogant Knightmaster what I can do.But my stomach hurts so much.
Suddenly she notices some mushrooms on the forest floor.Without hesitation she picks them and stuffs them into her mouth.
An hour later she is siting on a tree stump scratching herself like crazy.
"Those evil mushrooms did this to me",she says out loud.
Suddenly Elises notices a raccoon coming out of a bush.Looking at the cute little raccoon she gets a thought: raccoon=food.
The raccoon runs quickly and Elesis runs after it.
After a lot of running Elesis realises she is lost and worse,her sword is missing.
"Great I must of left my sword on that tree stump",she says to herself.
Suddenly she hears the sound of falling water and runs towards it.
She exits the forest and reaches the edge of a large waterfall; a tall elf with an ax is standing on the edge.
Soddenly he turns to Elesis and says: "Aha ,another human hunter has come to the forest.Prepare to meet your end!"
"Who are you mister long-eared rat",Elesis asks.
"I am Ryan and for your information I am elf,defender of the forests",he replyes.
"Well, you're one exeptionaly ugly elf",Elesis says with a smile.
"How dare you call me ugly?That is unaceptable!Defend yourself fiend!!!!,Ryan yells out and charges at Elesis with his ax.
Elesis quickly blocks Ryan's ax with one hand and with other hits Ryan in the stomach knocking him down and making him drop his ax.
Than just as Ryan gets up he receives a strong kick from Elesis that sends him into the waterfall below.
Elesis than picks up Ryan's ax and say:"Well,I gues that guy is all washed up,hahahaha."
After a long walk through the forest Elesis reached her destination-a large tree growing in the center of the forest.
"I can't believe I was sent all the way here just for a few apples",she says while attempting to pick an aple from the tree.
Suddenly the tree starts moving and knocks Elesis hard.
"It's alive?Doesn't matter I'll chop it down this axe!",she says charging the tree.
After 2 hours of pounding the tree with the ax it finally breaks into pieces.
"Finally",Elesis says with relief as she picks up the apples.
Suddenly she hears buzzing sound coming from the tree.
A large swarm emerge from the inside the tree remains.
"Noooooo!",she screams and runs away like crazy with the bees close behind.
Later at the castle Elesis is in the throne room with a basket of apples which she gives to the Knightmaster.
"Good job.Your in the team. I've also arranged who your team-mates are gona be-you'll be meeting them soon. Now you can rest..", Knightmasters says.
"yes",Elesis answers in a low voice and drops on the floor.
"She went to sleep? Amazing.I'll just take her to bed.",Knightmaster says, picking up Elesis from the floor and caring her out of the throne room.
Chapter 2-The team
After a hard morning practice with the Knighmaster Elesis went to her room for a rest. The Knighmaster was moving back and forth across the road leading to the castle.
"Where could those other girls bee? They should have been here already", the Knightmaster says to herself.
Sudenly she notices someone coming along the road. She looks carefully and say:
"Oh,it must be that elf girl.Lire,yes that's her name.Lire wobbles as she walks,tired from her long travel.
Suddenly, Lire is about to fall over from exhaustion.The Knightmaster immediately caches her and looks closly at her face.
"Oh,so cute"' the Knightmaster says.
A while later Lire wakes up and discovers she is in a bed wearing a nightdress she has never seen before with the Knightmaster sleeping next to her.
"aaaahhhhh!!",Lire screams in surprise.
"Where am I? And who are you",she says quicly to the Knightmaster who just woke up.
"You are in Serdin castle and I am the Knightmaster",the Knightmaster replies.
"Yes,I remember being sent here by the elder.Where are my clothes?",Lire asks.
"Geting cleaned.They where all sweaty.",Knightmaster replies.
" You undressed me!?",Lire sundenly realises.
"Yes.I must admit I really like your body",the Knightmaster replies with a naughty smile.
Niiiiiiice... poison mushrooms xD
Anyone read mine yet? Or is it still not on the list
updated
Finished chapter 1.
anyone?
You made Elesis dumber than Amy o.o
That's great ;D
thanks-that link in library works.
Anyway-English isn't my main language.
Gona intend to make fun of the grandchase characters and add some violence too.
Started Chapter 2.
Lol! This is a pretty cool fanfic. Can't wait for chapter 3. x3
Thanks Milk!