Well I don't have a title worked out just yet, to be honest, I wrote this on two premises. One- I'm bored, two- my friend said I need to start writing again since I keep saying that I'm bored. Since I'm stumped on my other fanfiction for Shaman King I decided to do a GC fanfic.I'll be honest, this might be completely retarded but I think it looked decent, I already have a decent idea of where I want it to go too. If I do continue I'd probably updated every 2 weeks or sooner. (A lot sooner probably since school is easy.) So without further ado, my attempt at a fanfic.
Elesis has returned home after the war, being such a great warrior, returning to society, won't be such an easy to do for our Elesis, or will it?
PrologueElesis stared at her mother idly as she was being scolded yet again.“Young lady, how do you ever expect to get on with your life being such a brute? You need to settle down and get yourself a husband.” her mother exclaimed in a fury of over motherliness.Elesis yawned and retorted, “Why should I settle down? I’m only 17 and I saved the world, I don’t see the point of getting a useless nag of a husband by my side.” Elesis thought the saving the world part seemed more conceited after she had said it.Her mother shook her head; then she seemed to get a grand idea. “Well your father would have wanted you to settle down after this entire mess was over. You maybe a great warrior and all, but you are still a girl Elesis, you still need to marry.”This shook something that Elesis didn’t want shaken. “Don’t you say what dad would want. He’s not here to say to me, ‘Elesis go get yourself a pitiful man and settle down, get yourself a family and be happy’.” Elesis huffed and stood up from her seat, staring at her locked up weapons. “Can I..”“No.” her mother said immediately. She smiled slightly at her daughter before going on. “Please Elesis, you know I’m right about this, you should go and settle down with a nice young man. Who knows, maybe you find yourself someone that makes you happy.”Elesis stared at her weapons one more time then turned about face to her mother. “What do you want me to do then..” Little did her mother know that Elesis intended to turn down every last man she met without remorse, making sure her mother would give up sooner or later. Her mother looked at her unconvinced and slowly said, “There’s a ball at the castle within a weeks time, I want you to go and enjoy yourself, be around some young men for once instead of a goblin. Just that for now my dearest daughter.” She knew it wasn’t this easy to extort Elesis, she knew this was about to become one hell of an uphill battle, to get her one and only child into a good family, far away from those nasty monsters around Serdin and god knows where else.
CH1-Preparing the brute“Lady Elesis you don’t plan to go to the ball wearing that do you?” asked Lire in concern, realizing Elesis was wearing her last battle suit she had used during the war.Arme and Lire had been called over by Elesis’ mother to prepare her daughter for the ball that was coming up, knowing that they had some more power then she did.“What’s wrong with it Lire? I think it proves that I’m one hell of a feisty chick that won’t settle for any of these pompous asses that sat around hiding in their homes while we fought for their safety.” Elesis said, a note of rebellion in her tone.“Does it really surprise you Lire? Elesis has never been one to dress nicely. She’s more at home in the dirt with the pigs then in a dress.” quoted Arme as she stared at Elesis in amusement.“Cut the crap Arme, you know I don’t want to get married, let alone to some kid that things he’s the top of the world because his daddy left him a lot of cash and influence. I’d rather date the baker down the street and he has the worst acne in the kingdom.” said Elesis in one long breath. Her face completely red from the lack of oxygen.“Lady Elesis remember what we said, take breaths when you speak, it’s called being normal.” said Lire, trying not to insult Elesis. “Hey hey, I am normal, I was brought up by a Serdin Tracker to be a Knight. All this fancy crap is getting to me. I don’t want to be a nice little girl sitting on her ass with kids running amuck through the house, nearly pulling my hair out because my husband lost his money at the pub to a goblin in a bad bet. So to me, talking in one breath at the speed of light and hating to dress up for a fancy little ball is quite normal thank you very much Ms. Lire.” Elesis rambled, undressing from her battle armor and storing it back in her closet, very indiscreetly walking around in her undergarments. “Elesis we know that, but for god’s sake make your mother happy and try. Who knows, maybe you find one of those guys that goes from poor too rich, he’d know what it’s like to live in the shitter like you do.” said Arme, trying hard not to burst out in laughter. Elesis smiled at the crude joke, knowing she wouldn’t like Arme if it weren’t for her erratic and feisty attitude towards her. Elesis then stared in disdain at a dress in the corner of her closet, trying to hide it from view before Arme forced her to try it on. This backfired, making it obvious that she was trying to hide something from her two friends, sadly Lire was the one that backstabbed her. “What you hiding Lady Elesis?” she inquired innocently, too innocently, those elves were evil. They look sweet and innocent but behind the veil of innocence there is a little evil elf that’s trying to screw you over into wearing a dress.“NOTHING!” Elesis exclaimed shutting the closet. This proved as a pitiful form of resistance as Arme used Tornado to throw Elesis to the side and lay bare the closet to Arme and Lire to examine for the incriminating item that Elesis so desperately had attempted to hide from them. Elesis stood as Arme pulled it out, the black and red dress her mother had bought without her consent. The dress she had bought to try and get her out and about with the nobles of the kingdom. She had deemed it the get laid dress at the point she saw it. “No, put it back, I will NOT wear that thing.” Elesis squeaked feebly as Lire and Arme advanced on her, dress in hand. “Please don’t, I don’t want to, don’t!” Elesis screamed as her friends forced her into the dress.“Not bad, you actually look like a girl Elesis.” remarked Arme in pure astonishment. The dress was revealing, leaving little to the imagination as Elesis developed breasts fit into the garment nicely, her hips curved into the dress perfectly. “Looks like your mom measured you, huh Elesis.” “She forced me.” Elesis said pathetically, looking into the mirror, amazed at what she saw. “Since when do I have boobs?” she stated stupidly. She pressed her hands to her breasts, hips, repeating the process remarking at how she didn’t realize she had matured so much.“Lady Elesis, you are saying that you didn’t realize you had, crudely stating, matured over these last two years?” asked Lire, dumbfounded, not thinking Elesis was that absentminded.“Well I knew they were there, just didn’t know they had gotten so big, I mean, sure I felt a bit heavier once I got home, but I thought that was because I was eating more. Never thought my jugs would be the things weighing me down.” Elesis stated bluntly. Her hands were still fondling her breasts as she stared in the mirror. “Change my hair a bit and I’d be down right sexy neh girls?” she said, now rearranging her hair into different positions.Lire and Arme stared dumbfounded. What had they done with Elesis, how could one dress make their brutish companion into a girl that actually cared about her looks, that actually wanted to make her appearance coordinated in a sane manor. Oh my god, they had broken Elesis.
CH2-The Day BeforeWell they had done it, they had really done it. Elesis was acting like a girl. Putting her in a dress and pushing her in front of a mirror had broken something in Elesis’ little mind. They were seriously up shits creek, they broke the best fighter out of them. Her mother was more than thrilled at seeing the drastic change in Elesis’ behavior. She was wearing casual summer dresses, drinking tea with her pinky extended, chatting with the neighbors about nothing in particular and not staring at her weapons in a doggedly desire. To be honest, her mother thought they had replaced the brute was a well mannered lady.The day before the ball Lire and Arme were in hushed whispers in their room, quickly discussing what had happen the past week.“It’s not normal Arme, we like snapped a twig in Elesis’ mind that shouldn’t have been snapped. I don’t think it’s natural for a girl to change that much with just getting into a dress. I’m scared Arme.” whimpered the elf, not liking the current situation they were in.“I already know that it’s not normal for Elesis to be like that, don’t need to say it over and over again. I mean come on, Elesis in a dress would be like me giving up my magic for a piece of chicken. But, she seems happy, I don’t see why we NEED to change her back. Not to mention her brutish ways are gone and she seems interested in getting herself a man.” Arme said, that amused smirk never leaving her face. “I know it’s natural of a girl to act like that, but not Elesis. Not to mention what do you think the others will say at the ball when they see her warped so much in such a small amount of time. I think Lass will blow a gasket once he sees what we did to Elesis!” mumbled Lire, the amusement on Arme’s face pestering her beyond no bounds.“Not like we can do much about it Lire, until Elesis outgrows her girly phase we can’t do anything but let it play out on it’s own. Maybe after the ball she’ll cool the girlyness down a notch and everything will go back to the way it was.” mused Arme.“Elesis and the word girly don’t belong in the same sentence.” said an unknown voice. “Who’s there!” questioned Arme, her hand on a small wand, ready to strike an intruder at first site.“Cool it Arme, it’s just me.” said the girlish voice. She stepped into the room and they both realized it was Amy.“Oh thank god. Amy how much did you hear?” asked Lire, hoping Amy would have a solution to their dilemma.“All of it, I just didn’t feel like sitting yet so I waited outside till the time was right, quite dramatic wasn’t it?” Amy boasted proudly.Lire and Arme shook their heads in unison. Arme then asked, “What do you think is wrong with Elesis. Her going girly on us will seem strange, not to mention it’s just not right.”“Well, I think what you said was right, let it play out and we’ll see where it goes from there. Maybe it’s just all an act to keep you fools quiet and leave her alone. I would be annoyed if I kept being pestered into formal engagements like she is.” said Amy.Arme sighed and sat down on the edge of the bed. Lire then sat on her own bed and said, “Well you both are right, we’ll deal with it tomorrow. It’ll be interesting to see the other three’s reaction once they see what happen to le brute le Elesis.”“Yep…Wait, where am I sleeping?!” Amy blurted out. “Well you can sleep on the floor Amy, I mean, it’s quite clean you know.” said Arme, laughing to herself. Lire then made some room on her bed an offered her a space which she promptly accepted, tossing a pillow into Arme’s face, causing one loud ruckus through Elesis house for a long period of the night.
CH3-Troubles of a ThiefLass looked about the room at the castle, it was already feeling stuffy even before the festivities began. “God, why in hells name did I promise Ronan to come to this thing.” he muttered to himself. Looking about for Ronan or even Ryan he sighed in defeat and stepped out to the courtyard. It would be some time before any guests would begin arriving and it gave him some time to be himself. He quickly loosened his collar and rolled up his sleeves, sitting down on a nice patch of grass. He wondered if the girls would be able to come, knowing Elesis it would be one hell of an epic battle to get her here, even mightier then fighting Kaze. He looked up at the darkening blue sky. He was awaken from his daydreams as Ronan jogged up to him, his face flushed.“Lass get off your ass and clean up. Guests are arriving if you didn’t notice. You are going to get one hell of a surprise by the way!” Ronan said, rushing away at the sight of more guests arriving. Wondering what the big surprise was, much to his dislike, he rolled his sleeves down and fixed his collar, striding in to the castle with the rest of the crowd. He began to mingle with the crowd, politely answering questions from people who recognized him, glaring at people that reminded him of his wrong doings. He then heard a glass fall and a monster of a laugh. No one could laugh like that except one person. He walked up to see a hysteric Ryan pointing at a beautiful girl. Ryan’s shirt was out of place, even if it was green it had looked decent when he was recently dressed. “Yo Ryan what’s so funny?” Lass asked politely. It took the elf some time to compose himself and even then it made little sense.“Oh gods, its…oh god, it’s freaking Ele…” was all Lass could get out of Ryan before he started laughing his elfish ass off again. Lass sighed slightly and turned to Arme, looking her over slightly in her extravagant purple gown.“Arme, can you explain why this idiot is laughing so hard?” Lass asked impatiently, tired of watching Ryan roll around on the floor laughing. Arme shook her head and pointed over to Lire. Lire was in the same style gown as Arme, only in a bright green.“Nice dress Lire. Anyways what’s with your man?” Lire shook her head at the question and directed him at Amy in her pink dress, a look of utter amusement on her face, one that could rival Arme’s any day.
“Please don’t redirect me again, getting annoying ya know?” he said irritably, “Now why in damn hells name is Ryan dying on the floor there?”“Why didn’t you know? I thought Ronan would have at least told you, you seemed to take such a fancy to her.” Amy said absentmindedly, “Well that chick right there, the one Ryan here couldn’t believe was standing before him, is Elesis.”Lass’s mouth opened stupidly. He couldn’t believe it. He slowly turned around and stared stupidly at Elesis. This couldn’t be the girl that had single handily kicked his ass countless times. Not this girl, this girl had boobs, she looked cute and she seemed to have that glow of never being able to hurt someone. This could not be Elesis. In a spurt of bravery, Lass walked straight up to the supposed Elesis. “Umm, hello?”“Hello Lass, good to see you again.” Elesis responded quite politely, she then turned back to see Ryan finally calming down after a discreetly well placed kick from Lire. “He seemed to be in shock of seeing me like this, I can’t imagine why.” “But, you are Elesis, you are the girl that could strangle a man to death at a whim?” Lass asked uncertainly, still not buying this charade. “Yes Lass, is it so strange for me to be so lady like? To be wearing such a dress? To be attending a ball without having a wand at my head and people telling me exactly what to do in risk of me getting my head blown off?” Elesis asked innocently. Lass stared at her in a look that could only be described as one thing, pure admiration and love at first sight.
CH4-Dare to believe“Lass, you look a bit sick man.” said Ronan some time after Lass’s first encounter with Elesis. “You feeling ok?”Lass wasn’t paying Ronan any attention, he continued to stare at the beauty that had appeared before him that night. She walked about the hall, politely greeting people, leaving many more Ryan’s in her wake. She seemed to glide from place to place. He was in a trance, and he liked it. “Ronan I don’t believe it, she’s…she’s freaking beautiful. I think I’m in love Ronan, I want her.” Lass said bluntly. His look upon Elesis becoming lustful. “I used to dig how she was all tomboyish and knew how to protect herself and ***, but man, girly Elesis is one hell of a looker.”Ronan snapped out of his own selfish stare fest at his own girl and turned his attention to Lass. “But don’t you think it’s strange, I mean, they just put a dress on the girl and she becomes the best of girls, it isn’t natural.” said Ronan, “I mean, hell I like this Elesis not jumping to action at every moment, but think of the consequences, what if she’s lost her will to fight?”“I don’t care, I’ll fight for her!” Lass stated stupidly. Ronan sighed and smirked at his own thought, then yelled for Ryan to come over. “Ryan, I have one hell of an idiot here. He thinks that he can get himself Elesis. I’m telling him that she isn’t normal right now but he’s stubborn on the thought.” explained Ronan. Ryan pondered for a moment.“Lass, I got a dare for you. More of a bet you could say.” Ryan said. Ronan at that point knew it was a mistake to have called over Ryan. “How about you go over there to that maiden you call Elesis and ask her to dance. Then following that make some moves, see where that gets you. If I get proof that you get some face action I’ll be your slave for a day.” “Pff, you got yourself a bet. And I was going to ask for the dance anyways, now I just have a better incentive!” Lass stated boldly. He then sat his ass right back down when he got a look from Elesis in the distance. “Umm, what are the consequences for backing down..”“You have to run around naked through the courtyard as the guests are leaving.” Ryan said simply. “He can’t! I’ll get yelled at on his behalf! I’ll get my ass handed to me by the Queen!” Ronan said immediately, freaking out of the possibility of a streaking Lass in the court yard.“Ugh. I got myself into one hell of a mess. Can’t let Ronan suffer on my behalf.” Standing back up Lass slowly made his way to Elesis. “Err Elesis, may I have this dance?” he asked quite pitifully. Elesis turned her head and smiled, giving Lass her hand. “Of course, I wouldn’t have it any other way.”Sighing in great relief he took her hand and got into the rhythm of the music. His hand firmly went around her waist, pulling her close to him. They moved slowly to the soft music as he asked her, “What changed you so much Elesis? What made you so different?”She sighed against him and smiled slightly. “I don’t know, I mean, I got into the dress and realized how different I looked. Who knows, maybe it was just my calling to be this way. Or maybe it’s just a desire to be, as my mother called it, ‘normal’. Whatever it is, I’m happy.”Lass smiled slightly and asked, “But what will happen to our oh so daring Elesis?”Elesis smirked and said, “Mmm she’ll be back, but I’m going to enjoy this as long as I can. I’m getting some looks aren’t I? Especially from a certain handsome thief.” Lass went from calm to anxious as his face converted to bright red, stumbling upon his words. “No! I mean yes! I mean I wasn’t staring! Certainly not at your boobs! I wasn’t I swear! Oh god!”Elesis laughed lightly, her arms around Lass’s neck. “Silly boy, lustful boy too, you are trying to hard to please someone you already quite happy. I liked you long before this, now, how about we cause one hell of an exit?”Lass smirked and looked about the room, wondering what this grand exit should be, then he saw it. One Ryan and Lire equaled a perfect combination for an exit. He released his beloved Elesis and ran up to Ryan, tilting his hand onto Lire, forcing him to spill the dark red wine he held. Ryan looked up in indignation and Lass moved him out of the way as Lire launched a pastry at him. The pastry flew by and slammed right into Amy’s head. Causing the dancer to twirl in a fury, pushing a waiter into poor Arme. Arme quickly snapped, ignoring protests from Ronan to calm down. A flurry of wind was whipped from her hidden wand. The tornado’s greater in force because of her anger. Lass quickly scooped up a laughing Elesis and ran out before a renegade tornado harmed either of them. He set her down in the same place he had been earlier that evening. Staring up at the chaos he had begun in the castle, hearing Ronan roar in anger as he commanded the Kanavan Knights to subdue the party goers.“Wow, that was not what I had expected as an exit, it was more in terms of a kiss on the lips if you catch my drift Lass?” Elesis said, a glint of mischief in her eyes.Lass leaned upon Elesis and firmly planted his lips upon hers, savoring the moment that was long over do in his mind. He wrapped his arms around her waist, pulling her closer. His fantasy kiss was drawn short by a beast of a yell from the castle entrance. “You son of ***! Do you know you just train wrecked the annual ball!?” Ronan screamed as he came charging at Lass and Elesis, a glaive in his hand. “Holy crap, cool it boy!” Lass yelled as he pushed Elesis onto her back and jumped out of the way of the glaive. Lass busted out two daggers he had kept in his pockets and started to try and block the knight in his blinded rage. “You are going to hurt so badly Lass!” Ronan yelled as he continued to cut through the air with his glaive, making Lass stay on the defensive. In a spurt of inspiration Lass side stepped a blow and jumped a top of the glaive, standing firmly on it to keep it impaled to the ground. “Get off my glaive Lass!” Lass shook his head.“Calm down, I’m sorry it escalated so much, didn’t think making Ryan tip his drink would cause so much damage.” Lass said innocently. It was a horrible lie and he knew it, he had gotten the laugh of a life time seeing the castle in such chaos. “I can help with the clean up if you want me too?” Lass said, trying to get Ronan to relax his grip on the glaive.“Ugh. Just leave, just go before you do something else.” said Ronan, exhausted from having swung his glaive so wildly after having had it in storage for so long. Lass took the drop of the glaive as his sign to leave and he stepped off the glaive and walked up to an awaiting Elesis. “Well Sir Lass, escort this fair maiden to her home?” Elesis said with a smirk, her face full of a sinister mischief. Lass smiled and said, “Why sure Lady Elesis, and maybe you shall invite me to spend some time in your humble abode.”Elesis flushed completely red, punching Lass on the arm and walking away from him, her head turned to the side. Chuckling slightly Lass chased after his new love.
^By Me
rangerboy71:o: whats it about tho but other than that its good :3 and theres alot of new fanfic writer including me :#
Mm, without spoiling it, it's about Elesis and how she's going to end up going againist her will.
rangerboy71:k post that before in the introduction where you explained why you wrote it and it will clarify the story alot more
Mmk, got a creative stroke for the intro so I put a mini intro before the prologue.
^ Ocean™ ^ Maid Guitars, 'nuff said.
Please use substantiable support when agree/disagreeing. ^^;
I lol'd a bit when Elesis started talking about her breasts.
Nice story. o_o
TehAzn:Easy to the eyes, for one. I'm not sure if everyone would comprehend all that complex vocabulary you use though.. >_>Anyways, I'm always up for a "casual" fanfic. Looking forward to how this one will progress~ *adds to list of fanfics*
Yes, my complex vocabulary will be the end of me. -is hated by friends for overuse of fancy words-
Glad you liked it, I'm already somewhat into chapter two just as a side note. =D
Thanks, the breast part came to me all of a sudden and I just HAD to put that in there.
TehAzn:Hey, just a comment of a random passerby--ignore or listen, y'know? :)
True, very true, I'll try cutting the fancy words for the next chapter so it's easier to the eyes.
Well Chapter 2 is now up and I'll quite admit that it's just an extra chapter to add another character into the mix. Oh how I hate those kind of chapters. Already worked out Chapter 3 as well, just don't feel like posting it just yet.
I'll give the next chapters title as a teaser. =P
Chapter3-Troubles of a Thief.
© Lunaset
Could have took it more slowly, tbh~ (I didn't even see this thread, because of all the other threads pushing it out of page one. Srsly, I only look at the first page. >_>)
Still, I can agree, it is a burden to do some side-work that people might prioritize more than schoolwork.. *guilty*Though there wasn't much of a big conflict, it was a very pleasant read just from a happy love-ending-fanfic. If you have more time on your hands later, you should try to start a more complicated fanfic perhaps? Or you can just continue from here with a casual sequel. :)